[Anima] [Errata Verified] RFC8994 (7071)

RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> Mon, 15 January 2024 10:52 UTC

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The following errata report has been verified for RFC8994,
"An Autonomic Control Plane (ACP)". 

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7071

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Status: Verified
Type: Editorial

Reported by: Corey Bonnell <corey.bonnell@digicert.com>
Date Reported: 2022-08-04
Verified by: Rob Wilton (IESG)

Section: 6.2.2

Original Text
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   The acp-node-name in Figure 2 is the ABNF definition ("Augmented BNF
   for Syntax Specifications: ABNF" [RFC5234]) of the ACP Node Name.  An
   ACP certificate MUST carry this information.  It MUST contain an
   otherName field in the X.509 Subject Alternative Name extension, and
   the otherName MUST contain an AcpNodeName as described in
   Section 6.2.2.

Corrected Text
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   The acp-node-name in Figure 2 is the ABNF definition ("Augmented BNF
   for Syntax Specifications: ABNF" [RFC5234]) of the ACP Node Name.  An
   ACP certificate MUST carry this information.  It MUST contain an
   otherName field in the X.509 Subject Alternative Name extension, and
   the otherName MUST contain an AcpNodeName as described in
   Section 6.2.2.1.

Notes
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David von Oheimb discovered [1] that section 6.2.2 is self-referential and incorrect regarding the section reference to the ASN.1 module.

The correct section number is 6.2.2.1.

[1] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/spasm/-ymZk94KFzzolZSsJh6HONnypXQ/

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RFC8994 (draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-30)
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Title               : An Autonomic Control Plane (ACP)
Publication Date    : May 2021
Author(s)           : T. Eckert, Ed., M. Behringer, Ed., S. Bjarnason
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Autonomic Networking Integrated Model and Approach
Area                : Operations and Management
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG