Re: [apps-discuss] apps-team review of draft-ietf-mif-current-practices-11

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Thanks for the review. Please see inline

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Xiaodong Lee [mailto:[e-mail]]
> Envoyé : mercredi 27 avril 2011 15:55
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> Objet : apps-team review of draft-ietf-mif-current-practices-11
> 
> I have been selected as the Applications Area Review Team reviewer for
> this draft (for background on apps-review, please see
> http://www.apps.ietf.org/content/applications-area-review-team).
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
> or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-mif-current-practices-11
> Title: Current Practices for Multiple Interface Hosts
> Reviewer: Xiaodong Lee
> 
> Review Date: April 26, 2011
> 
> Review Summary:
> This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC but
> has a few issues that suggested to be fixed before publication.
> 
> Major Issues:
> This draft gives the introduction about the multiple-interface solutions
> implemented in some widely used operating systems. It seems that this
> draft just simply introduces or lists every example. The author might
> consider the following suggestions:
>      - Do some simple analysis of pros and cons of every implementation
> or solution;
>      - Compare different solutions and make some possible suggestions.
> Since this draft aims for an informational RFC, doing some analysis and
> comparison will be helpful for the readers.
> 

Another document that analyzes current practice is chartered. This document will address above points.

> Minor issues:
> - Both the "multiple-interface" and the "multi-interface" are used in
> this document with the same meaning.
> - Term "PEERDNS" might have reference.
> 

Ok

> 
> Nits:
> - In Section 3.2.2.3, second paragraph, third sentence:
>                  "become" should be "becomes" here.

Ok

> 
> Regards,
> 
> --
> --
> Xiaodong Lee,
> VP&CTO, CNNIC
> Professor, Chinese Academy of Sciences