Re: [apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-ohye-canonical-link-relation-04

[Peter Saint-Andre <[e-mail]>]

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On 12/15/11 2:20 AM, Yoshiro YONEYA wrote:
> I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for
> this draft (for background on appsdir, please see
> http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate).
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.  Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
> or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
> 
> Document: draft-ohye-canonical-link-relation-04
> Title: The Canonical Link Relation
> Reviewer: Yoshiro Yoneya
> Review Date: 2011-12-15
> IETF Last Call Date: 2011-12-29
> IESG Telechat Date: 2012-01-05
> 
> Summary:
> 
> This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC but
> has a few issues that should be fixed before publication.
> 
> Major Issues:
> 
> - Section 8: Internationalisation Considerations
> 
>   Refering whole [RFC3986] is too broad. As noted in IESG writeups, this
>   section should refer to section 8 of [RFC5988].

Yes, that would be better.

> Minor Issues:
> 
> - Section3: The Canonical Link Relation
> 
>   Using similar terms such as canonical URI, target URI, and canonical
>   target are confusing.  Including reference or definition of these
>   terms is preferrable.

I think it would be clearer to use only the term from RFC 5988 (i.e.,
"target IRI").

Thanks for the review!

Peter

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