Re: [apps-discuss] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC6902 (4419)

"Manger, James" <James.H.Manger@team.telstra.com> Tue, 21 July 2015 01:09 UTC

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From: "Manger, James" <James.H.Manger@team.telstra.com>
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RFC6902 "JSON Patch" section A.14. "~ Escape Ordering" is correct, but could be worded more clearly.

Saying "The test succeeds" would make more sense than "The resulting JSON [is]". A.8, A.9, and A.15 are better worded with their use of "op":"test".

Compare A.14. to A.15. "Comparing Strings and Numbers". They both use "op":"test" with the same target and very similar patches. A.15 says "This results in an error, because the test fails". That contrasts well with A.14 were the test succeeds.


Perhaps a better editorial errata would be:

> Section: A.14
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
> An example target JSON document:
> 
>   {
>     "/": 9,
>     "~1": 10
>   }
> 
>   A JSON Patch document:
> 
>   [
>     {"op": "test", "path": "/~01", "value": 10}
>   ]
> 
>   The resulting JSON document:
> 
>   {
>     "/": 9,
>     "~1": 10
>   }
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> An example target JSON document:
> 
>   {
>     "/": 9,
>     "~1": 10
>   }
> 
>   A JSON Patch document:
> 
>   [
>     {"op": "test", "path": "/~01", "value": 10}
>   ]
> 
>   The test succeeds, as JSON Pointer escaping applies once to the "path" value.



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James Manger

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Subject: Re: [apps-discuss] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC6902 (4419)

This seems reasonable to me, although it does seem more like a text improvement than a strict errata - Barry, any thoughts?

I've raised an issue here:
  https://github.com/json-patch/json-patch-tests/issues/22
… as that's where most of the JSON Patch implementer community pays attention.

Cheers,


> On 17 Jul 2015, at 9:36 pm, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6902, 
> "JavaScript Object Notation (JSON) Patch".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=6902&eid=4419
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Technical
> Reported by: Brett Zamir <brettz9@yaho.com>
> 
> Section: A.14
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
> An example target JSON document:
> 
>   {
>     "/": 9,
>     "~1": 10
>   }
> 
>   A JSON Patch document:
> 
>   [
>     {"op": "test", "path": "/~01", "value": 10}
>   ]
> 
>   The resulting JSON document:
> 
>   {
>     "/": 9,
>     "~1": 10
>   }
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> Proper JSON Pointer escaping should occur when resolving paths for 
> application to the target document.
> 
> An example target JSON document:
> 
>   {
>     "/": 9,
>     "~1": 10
>   }
> 
>   A JSON Patch document:
> 
>   [
>     {"op": "add", "path": "/~01", "value": 11}
>   ]
> 
>   The resulting JSON document:
> 
>   {
>     "/": 9,
>     "~1": 11
>   }
> 
> Notes
> -----
> At http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6902#appendix-A.14 , I have a few issues:
> 
> 1. Even though JSON Pointer is referenced elsewhere, I think reference ought to be made here to JSON Pointer in order to clarify what meaning "escape ordering" has here.
> 2. The operation indicated in this section is "test" which is not documented in its respective sections as returning any kind of document at all. I believe "add" or "replace" must have been the intended operation instead. And to make clear that the value of key "~1" would have actually been affected by such a modifying operation, the value in the result ought to differ from that in the original document.
> 
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> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC6902 (draft-ietf-appsawg-json-patch-10)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : JavaScript Object Notation (JSON) Patch
> Publication Date    : April 2013
> Author(s)           : P. Bryan, Ed., M. Nottingham, Ed.
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Applications Area Working Group APP
> Area                : Applications
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
> 

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