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Re: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-quic-v2-05

James <james.ietf@gmail.com> Mon, 10 October 2022 19:30 UTC

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Date: Mon, 10 Oct 2022 21:29:58 +0200
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Subject: Re: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-quic-v2-05
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Martin,

Thanks for clarifying, and no I'm not going to insist.

~ J

> On 10 Oct 2022, at 20:58, Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> James,
> 
> Thanks for the review!
> 
> I honestly don't think it's a big deal either way -- I'll add either normative word if you insist, but I don't think a requirement is necessary here and it flows a bit better this way in my opinion. "ignore" is obviously a pretty loose word to use -- it would certainly be OK for a client to log it or something.
> 
> On Sun, Oct 9, 2022 at 7:43 AM James Gruessing via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> Reviewer: James Gruessing
> Review result: Ready
> 
> This is my review of draft-ietf-quic-v2-05 as part of ART Last Call review.
> 
> Overall this is a well written document that is clear in its writing, and I
> have only one minor point of clarification.
> 
> Section 4.1 - "The client ignores Retry packets using other versions." - is
> this supposed to be a normative phrase, i.e. "The client SHOULD/MUST ignore
> Retry packets"? This sentence feels out of place in a paragraph with normative
> text defining other requirements. Or is this a behaviour defined in VN that I
> have missed?
> 
>

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