[art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-dispatch-javascript-mjs-10

Mark Nottingham via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 27 October 2021 02:10 UTC

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Subject: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-dispatch-javascript-mjs-10

Reviewer: Mark Nottingham
Review result: Ready with Nits

This document is ready for publication, with two small nits / questions about
the content.

## Nits

- In Section 3, the reader is left hanging -- I expected a statement along the
lines of 'The media types in this document allow such out of band information
to be conveyed.'

- Throughout, the phrase 'is not considered part of this document' is a bit odd
-- do you mean 'is not controlled by this document' or similar?

[art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-dispa… Mark Nottingham via Datatracker
Re: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-d… Mathias Bynens
Re: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-d… Francesca Palombini