Re: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-dispatch-javascript-mjs-10
Mathias Bynens <mths@google.com> Fri, 03 December 2021 12:53 UTC
Return-Path: <mathiasb@google.com>
X-Original-To: art@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: art@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 149A13A0908 for <art@ietfa.amsl.com>; Fri, 3 Dec 2021 04:53:22 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -17.099
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-17.099 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIMWL_WL_MED=-0.001, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001, USER_IN_DEF_DKIM_WL=-7.5, USER_IN_DEF_SPF_WL=-7.5] autolearn=unavailable autolearn_force=no
Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=google.com
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id DSkB17u_8NkH for <art@ietfa.amsl.com>; Fri, 3 Dec 2021 04:53:16 -0800 (PST)
Received: from mail-pj1-x102d.google.com (mail-pj1-x102d.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:4864:20::102d]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id A9BAA3A0913 for <art@ietf.org>; Fri, 3 Dec 2021 04:53:12 -0800 (PST)
Received: by mail-pj1-x102d.google.com with SMTP id nh10-20020a17090b364a00b001a69adad5ebso2416368pjb.2 for <art@ietf.org>; Fri, 03 Dec 2021 04:53:12 -0800 (PST)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=google.com; s=20210112; h=mime-version:references:in-reply-to:from:date:message-id:subject:to :cc; bh=D7CK0R71+zBukG9Y1iKi6WzYk21yQqq1oGMsHcP3Ocg=; b=mmME0A3r0BxfJugRLKVS2skBs5hHP67bWwgcz/zuiLgNnASCk1EeNO4UyyEfqrofMS YgYFTiRfi6VhUUji9mN9+znD0CgszyFxaqk+/9WQqONAN/B6OydR1/04rMNLD/kui19Y RZWumvbYBOPq4zY41Fcvs3KoUiNEkZtBqUiYgH4z3GTgYm9eu6G7CD2VrJRNYK8Z9zoP AdMn3u6icdNaXaMDHFMnBQsf+AgQn8uOiTf+7fuLKKrM3wg5Go6xN4aZFT+xyn50Ncw4 lpredE3U8O5zZq1Y5u7gBfJVdFtUdqJAN2BI71jlovR2mORqXGftRalQus4CraVWmkr4 qKsg==
X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20210112; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:references:in-reply-to:from:date :message-id:subject:to:cc; bh=D7CK0R71+zBukG9Y1iKi6WzYk21yQqq1oGMsHcP3Ocg=; b=eEJgEoRwrWHGDqyHNnf1LLh/+Y6kyJaBrqZ/on1uvtrqKKEcoclcCvIhGOGilhBF6N +unDr1qlMGaTLpstBWiV1U242igZ5yjO6nBvtzwxHgfIrOStq4H0IS7Lf9IwMs+db3qd aSp/f4sYJy+zR9B9THBZeje7psWTxvqv34/JUBA8lUvXw4PHeGA6FiiU72qJ3RIbK3Gj b9i4TxAgJRskFAKOq0RU5YxwUB78CY3nedkIsyYatAqiv05Otefy2KURhPG6rDwfYtG9 ze+9wzszYEdoHWYggztU37Y7Wg3bZLB7hU4sTILRk1U+5tfH4T5kKtAA5rj8kylnKsTF T+7Q==
X-Gm-Message-State: AOAM530UB+AljM2QRYuR8GodbtCYFh9iKIpM6tpTgzvZ1EIq3LB8ZYSA LfSxjNCG7C9HYGMgzQ/QkTE3gtZpW5WflJOgTDkolfdOfXH8ng==
X-Google-Smtp-Source: ABdhPJzdH9cZO/yPSZAWpFIESosemIrPGU0zYxHu2EYfjd79k7EoQAXsoq7WerxGYfUowLR+yVyl3nmeln1ErSr1itU=
X-Received: by 2002:a17:90b:1806:: with SMTP id lw6mr13869801pjb.59.1638535990336; Fri, 03 Dec 2021 04:53:10 -0800 (PST)
MIME-Version: 1.0
References: <163530061139.5790.7895539177781487751@ietfa.amsl.com>
In-Reply-To: <163530061139.5790.7895539177781487751@ietfa.amsl.com>
From: Mathias Bynens <mths@google.com>
Date: Fri, 03 Dec 2021 09:52:58 -0300
Message-ID: <CADizRgZxvi0PG27Vjygif9B=zdKexy0ryEmynedVP7EGjY9BtA@mail.gmail.com>
To: Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>
Cc: art@ietf.org, dispatch@ietf.org, draft-ietf-dispatch-javascript-mjs.all@ietf.org, last-call@ietf.org
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="000000000000a854b405d23d634f"
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/lh8F9d1qWpxL9_0DHVjlTqUcnVI>
Subject: Re: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-dispatch-javascript-mjs-10
X-BeenThere: art@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29
Precedence: list
List-Id: Applications and Real-Time Area Discussion <art.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/art>, <mailto:art-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/art/>
List-Post: <mailto:art@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:art-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/art>, <mailto:art-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 03 Dec 2021 12:53:22 -0000
Thanks for the feedback! Revision -11 addresses this: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dispatch-javascript-mjs/11/ On Tue, Oct 26, 2021 at 11:10 PM Mark Nottingham via Datatracker < noreply@ietf.org> wrote: > Reviewer: Mark Nottingham > Review result: Ready with Nits > > This document is ready for publication, with two small nits / questions > about > the content. > > ## Nits > > - In Section 3, the reader is left hanging -- I expected a statement along > the > lines of 'The media types in this document allow such out of band > information > to be conveyed.' > > - Throughout, the phrase 'is not considered part of this document' is a > bit odd > -- do you mean 'is not controlled by this document' or similar? > > >
- [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-dispa… Mark Nottingham via Datatracker
- Re: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-d… Mathias Bynens
- Re: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-d… Francesca Palombini