Re: [Asap] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-asap-siptrunkingcapability-link-03: (with COMMENT)

["Derek Engi (deengi)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Lars, thanks for the comment and the support. Joe Clarke and Eric Vyncke also identified the lack of example in our URL. We will get the URL updated in the next revision.

Thanks again for the review.
Derek

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Date: Wednesday, April 12, 2023 at 9:13 AM
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Subject: Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-asap-siptrunkingcapability-link-03: (with COMMENT)
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# GEN AD review of draft-ietf-asap-siptrunkingcapability-link-03

CC @larseggert

Thanks to Dan Romascanu for the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review
(https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/cCbhIYhRA9a5A5cetapDsKTttmE).

## Comments

### Section 3, paragraph 4
```
                "href" :"https://capserver.ssp1.com/capserver/capdoc.json"
```
Please use an example domain here.

## Nits

All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to
address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there
will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
did with these suggestions.

### URLs

These URLs in the document did not return content:

 * https://capserver.ssp1.com/capserver/capdoc.json

## Notes

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