[Asap] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-asap-siptrunkingcapability-link-03: (with COMMENT)

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Subject: [Asap] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-asap-siptrunkingcapability-link-03: (with COMMENT)
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draft-ietf-asap-siptrunkingcapability-link-03: No Objection

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# GEN AD review of draft-ietf-asap-siptrunkingcapability-link-03

CC @larseggert

Thanks to Dan Romascanu for the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review
(https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/cCbhIYhRA9a5A5cetapDsKTttmE).

## Comments

### Section 3, paragraph 4
```
                "href" :"https://capserver.ssp1.com/capserver/capdoc.json"
```
Please use an example domain here.

## Nits

All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to
address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there
will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
did with these suggestions.

### URLs

These URLs in the document did not return content:

 * https://capserver.ssp1.com/capserver/capdoc.json

## Notes

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