Re: [Asap] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-asap-siptrunkingcapability-link-03: (with COMMENT)

["Derek Engi (deengi)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Éric, thanks for taking to the time to review. Here are our responses to your comments:

>> 1) is "an enterprise telephony SIP" defined and accepted in the SIP community ?
>> (I refer here to "enterprise"

After a chat with the rest of the authors, Enterprise SIP telephony network refers to an enterprise network interconnecting with their service providers (ITSPs) over a SIP trunk. The enterprise network internally can potentially use a bunch of telephony protocols, however, the signaling with the service provider is SIP. In the context of SIP trunking, we believe this is well understood.

>> 2) the abstract starts with "This specification defines", is an informational
>> document a specification ?

Fair point, we will update this to “This informational document”. This was carry over from before we made the switch to the informational track.

>> 3) s/https://capserver.ssp1.com/capserver/capdoc.json/https://capserver.ssp1.example.com/capserver/capdoc.json/

Agreed, we received another call out on this inconsistency and will make sure there is parity in the link relation draft and the ASAP draft that defines the capability set document.

Thanks again for the feedback and the support.
Derek

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From: Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <[e-mail]>
Date: Friday, April 7, 2023 at 5:55 AM
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Subject: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-asap-siptrunkingcapability-link-03: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks for the work done in this document.

Some comments though:

1) is "an enterprise telephony SIP" defined and accepted in the SIP community ?
(I refer here to "enterprise"

2) the abstract starts with "This specification defines", is an informational
document a specification ?

3)
s/https://capserver.ssp1.com/capserver/capdoc.json/https://capserver.ssp1.example.com/capserver/capdoc.json/

Hope this helps to improve the document,

Regards

-éric