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From: John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net>
To: Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca>
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LGTM. Thanks, I’ve cleared.

—John

> On Apr 4, 2024, at 12:13 PM, Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> wrote:
> 
> John Scudder via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
>> Changing “by working with” to “in consultation with” or even just
>> removing “by” would address my concern.
> 
> If I remove "by", I get:
> 
>   The ASDF WG will develop these extensions working with experts from OneDM
>   and its contributing organizations to extend SDF to cover aspects such as
>   digital twin, mapping to other IoT SDOs, and gateway interactions
>   translating between IP and other transports.
> 
> And it doesn't read right.
> The grammar checker seems okay with it, but it seems wrong.
> So I'll go with "in consultation with":
> 
>   The ASDF WG will develop these extensions in consultation with experts
>   from OneDM and its contributing organizations to extend SDF to cover
>   aspects such as digital twin, mapping to other IoT SDOs, and gateway
>   interactions translating between IP and other transports.
> 
> I think that only Francesca can update the master copy, but the copy at:
> https://github.com/ietf-wg-asdf/asdf-working-group-notes/blob/charter-revision-2023/charter-proposals/charter.md
> 
> has been updated.
> 
> 
> 
> 
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> Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@sandelman.ca>   . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting )
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