Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9492 <draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8920bis-06> for your review

Madison Church <mchurch@amsl.com> Thu, 28 September 2023 19:42 UTC

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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9492 <draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8920bis-06> for your review
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Hi John and Acee,

John, thank you for your reply! We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page for this document (https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9492).

Acee, although TE and RSVP-TE are marked as well-known on our list, we did not remove the expansion for TE in the first sentence of the Introduction.

Thank you,
RFC Editor/mc

> On Sep 28, 2023, at 1:13 PM, John E Drake <jdrake=40juniper.net@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
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> I approve publication.
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> Yours Irrespectively,
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> John
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>> RFC9492 (draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8920bis-06)
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>> Title            : OSPF Application-Specific Link Attributes
>> Author(s)        : P. Psenak, Ed., L. Ginsberg, W. Henderickx, J. Tantsura, J. Drake
>> WG Chair(s)      : Acee Lindem, Christian Hopps
>> Area Director(s) : Alvaro Retana, John Scudder, Andrew Alston
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