Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9492 <draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8920bis-06> for your review
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From: "Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com>
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Thread-Topic: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9492 <draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8920bis-06> for your review
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Please see my responses inline. > -----Original Message----- > From: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> > Sent: Monday, September 18, 2023 5:52 PM > To: Peter Psenak (ppsenak) <ppsenak@cisco.com>; Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) > <ginsberg@cisco.com>; wim.henderickx@nokia.com; jefftant.ietf@gmail.com; > jdrake@juniper.net > Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org; lsr-ads@ietf.org; lsr-chairs@ietf.org; > chopps@chopps.org; jgs@juniper.net; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9492 <draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8920bis-06> for your > review > > Authors, > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) > the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > > 1) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We note that this > XML file was submitted in "prepped" format. We have "unprepped" the file to > make editing the document easier. Note that this does not impact the > document > text but does cause many changes to the XML code. --> > [LES:] Understood. Out of an abundance of caution I started with the XML available from Datatracker for RFC 8920. It had a number of "strangenesses" (at least to me) - but I chose not to modify them as I wanted the text/format to be as close as possible to RFC 8920. I wish there had been a more "up to date" version of the XML for me to start with - but there was not. > > 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in the > title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. --> > [LES:] None added > > 3) <!-- [rfced] FYI- We have rephrased the following sentence to introduce the > abbreviations for "Segment Routing" (SR) and "Loop-Free Alternates" (LFAs) > upon first use. Please let us know any objections. > > Original: > Since the original RSVP-TE use case was defined, additional > applications (e.g., Segment Routing Policy and Loop-Free > Alternates) that also make use of the link attribute > advertisements have been defined. > > Current: > Since the original RSVP-TE use case was defined, additional > applications such as Segment Routing (SR) Policy and Loop-Free > Alternates (LFAs) that also make use of the link attribute > advertisements have been defined. --> > [LES:] This is fine. > > 4) <!-- [rfced] We suggest updating "SLRG group" to "SLRG" to avoid > redundancy (if > expanded, “SLRG group” would read “Shared Risk Link Group group”). Please > review and let us know if any updates are needed. > > Original: > The SRLG of a link can be used in OSPF-calculated IPFRR (IP Fast > Reroute) [RFC5714] to compute a backup path that does not share any > SRLG group with the protected link. > > Perhaps: > The SRLG of a link can be used in OSPF-calculated IPFRR (IP Fast > Reroute) [RFC5714] to compute a backup path that does not share any > SRLG with the protected link. --> > [LES:] I agree with this change. > > 5) <!-- [rfced] Please review the following text. This sentence mentions Section > 4.2, but Section 4.2 does not exist in this document. Was "Section 4.1" > the intended text here? > [LES:] The correct reference is to Section 5. Sorry for the confusion. > Original: > Link attribute advertisements associated with zero-length Application > Identifier Bit Masks for both standard applications and user-defined > applications are usable by any application, subject to the > restrictions specified in Section 4.2. > > Perhaps: > Link attribute advertisements associated with zero-length Application > Identifier Bit Masks for both standard applications and user-defined > applications are usable by any application, subject to the > restrictions specified in Section 4.1. --> > > > 6) <!-- [rfced] Is it intentional for RFC 9256 to be the only RFC that uses > <displayreference> for citation tags? Please let us know if any updates are > needed for consistency. > > [RFC9256] -> [SEGMENT-ROUTING] > --> [LES:] No. This is a side effect because when RFC 8920 was originally published RFC9256 did not exist - it was still a draft. The same issue exists in RFC9479 - I will respond in that thread to alert the editors to that. > > > 7) <!-- [rfced] The following expansions are defined more than once > throughout the > document. May we use the abbreviated form for the following expansions > upon > first use per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide")? > > Loop-Free Alternates (LFAs) > Standard Application Bit Mask (SABM) > Segment Routing (SR) > traffic engineering (TE) > User Defined Application Bit Mask (UDABM) --> [LES:] Yes - please do. > > > 8) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online > Style Guide <https://www.rfc- > editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> > and let us know if any changes are needed. > Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should > still be reviewed as a best practice. --> > [LES:] No changes proposed . 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