Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-ietf-stir-messaging-08> for your review
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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-ietf-stir-messaging-08> for your review
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Jon and Ben, Just a reminder that we await your approvals of this document. Please review the document at the links below and let us know if you have any further updates/comments/questions. Thank you. RFC Editor/mf > On Nov 17, 2023, at 1:11 PM, Megan Ferguson <mferguson@amsl.com> wrote: > > > Murray, Jon, and Ben, > > Thank you for your replies. We have updated to make RFC 4648 a normative reference. > > Please review the files carefully as we do not make changes after publication. > > The files have been posted here (please refresh): > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9475.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9475.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9475.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9475.xml > > The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh): > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9475-diff.html (comprehensive diff) > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9475-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes only) > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9475-lastdiff.html (last to current version only) > > Please contact us with any further updates/questions/comments you may have. > > We will await overt approvals from each of the parties listed on the AUTH48 status page prior to moving forward to publication. > > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9475 > > Thank you. > > RFC Editor/mf > >> On Nov 17, 2023, at 9:57 AM, Peterson, Jon <Jon.Peterson@transunion.com> wrote: >> >> >> Sounds good to me. >> >> - J >> >> From: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> >> Date: Friday, November 17, 2023 at 10:30 AM >> To: Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>, Megan Ferguson <mferguson@amsl.com> >> Cc: Peterson, Jon <Jon.Peterson@transunion.com>, jon.peterson@team.neustar <jon.peterson@team.neustar>, chris-ietf@chriswendt.net <chris-ietf@chriswendt.net>, stir-ads@ietf.org <stir-ads@ietf.org>, stir-chairs@ietf.org <stir-chairs@ietf.org>, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>, RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> >> Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-ietf-stir-messaging-08> for your review >> >> 4648 is a PS, so I assume this change takes no additional process other than the AD approval that Murray just gave. Is that correct? Thanks! Ben. On Nov 17, 2023, at 9: 11 AM, Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@ gmail. com> wrote: Hi,Please make >> 4648 is a PS, so I assume this change takes no additional process other than the AD approval that Murray just gave. Is that correct? >> >> Thanks! >> >> Ben. >> >> >> On Nov 17, 2023, at 9:11 AM, Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com> wrote: >> >> Hi, >> >> Please make it normative. >> >> -MSK, ART AD >> >> On Mon, Oct 16, 2023 at 4:45 PM Megan Ferguson <mferguson@amsl.com> wrote: >> Greetings, >> >> *AD - please review the following question and provide guidance to the authors on this point: >> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] We have added RFC 4648 as an Informative Reference. Please let us know if it should be Normative instead. >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> The subsequent characters in the claim value are the base64 encoded >>>> [RFC4648] digest of a canonicalized and concatenated string or binary data >>>> based MIME body of the message. --> >>>> >>> >>> Um, I believe that’s okay as Informative, but I might ask our AD if he agrees. >>> >> >> Jon, >> >> Thank you for your reply. We have updated accordingly. >> >> Please review the files carefully as we do not make changes after publication. >> >> The files have been posted here (please refresh): >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9475.txt >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9475.pdf >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9475.html >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9475.xml >> >> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh): >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9475-diff.html (comprehensive diff) >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9475-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes only) >> >> Please contact us with any further updates/questions/comments you may have. >> >> We will await approvals from each of the parties listed on the AUTH48 status page prior to moving forward to publication. >> >> The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here: >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9475 >> >> Thank you. >> >> RFC Editor/mf >> >>> On Oct 12, 2023, at 8:34 AM, Peterson, Jon <Jon.Peterson@transunion.com> wrote: >>> >>> Sorry for the late reply, some comments inline. >>> >>> >>>> On Sep 8, 2023, at 4:05 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote: >>>> >>>> Authors, >>>> >>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. >>>> >>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please note that the title of the document has been >>>> updated as follows: >>>> >>>> Abbreviations have been expanded per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 (“RFC >>>> Style Guide”). Please review. >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> Messaging Use Cases and Extensions for STIR >>>> >>>> Current: >>>> Messaging Use Cases and Extensions for Secure Telephone Identity >>>> Revisited (STIR) >>>> >>>> --> >>> >>> OK >>> >>> >>>> >>>> >>>> 2) <!--[rfced] We had two questions about the first sentence in the >>>> Abstract: >>>> >>>> a) Should "protocol" or "problem statement" or some other noun follow >>>> the expansion of STIR in this text? If we cut "STIR" and just read >>>> with the expansion, this sounds a bit odd. >>>> >>>> b) May we break up this sentence as suggested below for the ease of >>>> the reader? >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> Secure Telephone Identity Revisited (STIR) provides a means of >>>> attesting the identity of a telephone caller via a signed token in >>>> order to prevent impersonation of a calling party number, which is a >>>> key enabler for illegal robocalling. >>>> >>>> Perhaps: >>>> The Secure Telephone Identity Revisited (STIR) protocol provides a >>>> means of attesting the identity of a telephone caller via a signed >>>> token. This prevents impersonation of a calling party number, which >>>> is a key enabler for illegal robocalling. >>>> >>> >>> I think the original is better. >>> >>> >>>> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 3) <!--[rfced] FYI - we have broken up the information in the following >>>> sentence to make it easier for the reader to digest. Please let >>>> us know if these changes have deviated from your intended >>>> meaning. >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> For the first case, where SIP negotiates a session where the media >>>> will be text messages or MIME content, as, for example, with the >>>> Message Session Relay Protocol (MSRP) [RFC4975], the usage of STIR >>>> would deviate little from [RFC8224]. >>>> >>>> Current: >>>> In the first case described in Section 3, SIP negotiates a >>>> session in which the media will be text messages or MIME content, as, >>>> for example, with the Message Session Relay Protocol (MSRP) >>>> [RFC4975]. This usage of STIR would deviate little from [RFC8224]. >>>> --> >>>> >>> >>> I would eliminate “described in Section 3” since this is the first sentence of Section 3.1 – we know where we are. “In the first case, Sip negotiates a session” etc. Otherwise current is fine. >>> >>> >>>> >>>> 4) <!--[rfced] Can the timestamp itself order things? Or can the >>>> timestamp be used to order things? >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> ...duplicate messages are easily detected, >>>> and the timestamp can order messages displayed to the user inbox in a >>>> way that precludes showing stale messages as fresh. >>>> >>>> Perhaps: >>>> ...duplicate messages are easily detected, and the timestamp can be >>>> used to order messages displayed in the user inbox in a way that >>>> precludes showing stale messages as fresh. >>>> --> >>>> >>> >>> Your perhaps option looks good. >>> >>> >>>> >>>> 5) <!--[rfced] FYI - We have updated the expansion of MMS as follows to >>>> match more common use in recent RFCs. Please let us know any >>>> objections: >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> multimedia message system (MMS) >>>> >>>> Current: >>>> Multimedia Messaging Service (MMS) >>>> --> >>> >>> OK >>> >>> >>>> >>>> >>>> 6) <!--[rfced] How may we update this text for clarity? We do not see >>>> "profiles" in RFC 8226. (Note that we have made the change from >>>> "profiles defines" to "profiles define" pending more >>>> information). >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> The [RFC8226] STIR certificate profiles defines... >>>> >>>> Perhaps: >>>> "Secure Telephone Identity Credentials: Certificates" [RFC8226] defines... >>>> >>>> Or perhaps: >>>> The STIR certificate profiles defined in [RFC8226]... >>>> --> >>>> >>> >>> I think “profiles” and “defines” in the original were just a redundant typo. Your “Perhaps” is correct: “[RFC8226] defines”. >>> >>> >>>> >>>> 7) <!--[rfced] This sentence describes a lot of things being "contain"ed. >>>> Might a rephrase benefit the reader? If so, please let us know >>>> how we may update. >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> As the "orig" and "dest" field of PASSporTs may contain URIs >>>> containing SIP URIs without telephone numbers, the STIR for messaging >>>> mechanism contained in this specification is not inherently >>>> restricted to the use of telephone numbers. >>>> >>>> >>> >>> Yeah that’s pretty bad. How about: >>> >>> As the “orig” and “dest” field of PASSporTs may contain SIP URIs without telephone numbers, the STIR for… >>> >>> >>>> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 8) <!--[rfced] May we update the following to avoid awkward hyphenation? >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> This specification offers no guidance on certification authorities who >>>> are appropriate to sign for non-telephone number "orig" values. >>>> >>>> Perhaps: >>>> This specification offers no guidance on certification authorities who >>>> are appropriate to sign for "orig" values that are not for use with >>>> telephone numbers. >>>> >>> >>> How about: This specification offers no guidance on appropriate certification authorities for desigining “orig” values that do not contain telephone numbers. >>> >>> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 9) <!--[rfced] Please note the following about the IANA Considerations >>>> and IANA-related text in the document: >>>> >>>> a) Please note that we have changed IESG to be IETF for the Change >>>> Controller of the "msgi" registration at >>>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.iana.org/assignments/jwt/jwt.xhtml__;!!N14HnBHF!-Go8giMg3oYK7EPYfukRw6EkY7aHj0rvYHbmI9FCnanwAGz_gT_tRpk8nMNJ7HikD5JH3xv-VATz_97iEEp1K0A$ . This is in accordance >>>> with the following note we received from IANA: >>>> >>>> "Note: in accordance with recent practice, the change controller for >>>> this registration has been changed from the IESG to the IETF." >>> >>> OK >>> >>> >>>> >>>> b) We have cut the URL to the registry mentioned in Section 6.2 to >>>> match Section 6.1. Please let us know any objections. >>> >>> OK >>> >>> >>>> >>>> c) We have removed the quote marks as they do not appear in the >>>> corresponding registries. >>> >>> OK >>> >>> >>>> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] We have added RFC 4648 as an Informative Reference. Please let us know if it should be Normative instead. >>>> >>>> Original: >>>> The subsequent characters in the claim value are the base64 encoded >>>> [RFC4648] digest of a canonicalized and concatenated string or binary data >>>> based MIME body of the message. --> >>>> >>> >>> Um, I believe that’s okay as Informative, but I might ask our AD if he agrees. >>> >>> >>>> >>>> 11) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions related to terminology use >>>> throughout the document: >>>> >>>> a) We note the use of the following similar terms: >>>> >>>> SIP Identity header >>>> Identity header >>>> Identity >>>> identity >>>> >>>> Please review these instances and let us know if any updates are >>>> necessary for clarity (e.g., should all "Identity header"s be called >>>> "SIP Identity header"s). >>>> >>> >>> I mean, I tend to favor being readable over strict on these matters. Scanning through the doc, I think it’s clear that referring to “Identity” in these contexts means the SIP Identity header from the remainder of the sentences in question. >>> >>> >>>> b) We see both: >>>> >>>> "orig" field >>>> "orig" values >>>> >>>> Should the latter be made "orig" field values? >>> >>> Where “orig” and “dest” and “iat” are referred to as “fields” (like in 4) that should more properly be “claims”. Claims have a value, so talking about the ‘“orig” value’ is fine. But we should say “claims” instead of “fields” for the few instances where PASSporT elements are referred to as “fields”: >>> >>> … the “dest” field of the PASSporT … >>> >>> … so that the “iat” field can be … >>> >>> … As the “orig” and “dest” field of… >>> >>> And also the last sentence in 1: … that specifies new fields for use in PASSporTs… >>> >>> Those should be “claim” or “claims.” (No changes to places where “Identity field” appears, though). >>> >>> >>>> >>>> c) We see the following uses of "baseline": >>>> >>>> i) At a high level, baseline PASSporT [RFC8225] claims provide similar >>>> value to... >>>> >>>> ii) Current usage of baseline [RFC8224] Identity is largely confined to >>>> INVITE requests that initiate telephone calls. >>>> >>>> iii) Per baseline [RFC8224], this specifications leaves it to local policy >>>> to determine how messages are handled after verification succeeds or >>>> fails. >>> >>> “Baseline” is being used in all three of cases in its naïve sense, to mean just “as the specification is written.” I would just eliminate the word in all three cases, it isn’t adding much value. >>> >>> >>>> >>>> For i), we see the use of "baseline claims" in RFC 8225, so we would >>>> simply suggest moving the citation tag as follows: >>>> >>>> Perhaps: >>>> At a high level, baseline PASSporT claims (see [RFC8225]) provide similar >>>> value to... >>>> >>>> For ii), we note that "baseline Identity" is not mentioned in RFC >>>> 8224. Please review this text and let us know how to update. >>>> >>>> For iii), we see RFC 8225 referred to as "the baseline PASSporT >>>> specification" in RFC 8224. Please review this text and let us know >>>> how to update. >>>> >>>> Perhaps: >>>> Per the guidance in the baseline PASSporT specification [RFC8225], this >>>> specification leaves it to local policy to determine how messages >>>> are handled after verification succeeds or fails. >>>> >>>> d) We see both PASSporT Type and PASSporT type. We updated to use the >>>> lowercase "type" throughout. Please let us know any objections. >>> >>> OK >>> >>> >>>> >>>> --> >>>> >>>> >>>> 12) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the >>>> online Style Guide >>>> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/*inclusive_language__;Iw!!N14HnBHF!-Go8giMg3oYK7EPYfukRw6EkY7aHj0rvYHbmI9FCnanwAGz_gT_tRpk8nMNJ7HikD5JH3xv-VATz_97ip7soJ18$ > >>>> and let us know if any changes are needed. >>>> >>>> For example, please consider whether the following should be updated: >>>> >>>> >>>> ...authorized to use the calling party number (or, for native SIP cases,... >>> >>> I would delete “native”, yes. >>> >>> >>>> >>>> >>>> In addition, please consider whether "tradition" should be updated for >>>> clarity. While the NIST website >>>> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.nist.gov/nist-research-library/nist-technical-series-publications-author-instructions*table1__;Iw!!N14HnBHF!-Go8giMg3oYK7EPYfukRw6EkY7aHj0rvYHbmI9FCnanwAGz_gT_tRpk8nMNJ7HikD5JH3xv-VATz_97iC0E6QT4$ > >>>> indicates that this term is potentially biased, it is also ambiguous. >>>> "Tradition" is a subjective term, as it is not the same for everyone. >>>> >>>> >>>> ...value to number-based messaging as they do to traditional >>>> telephone... >>>> >>>> ...treatment that differs from traditional delivery expectations of >>>> SIP... >>>> >>>> ...the traditional telephone network and those based on >>>> over-the-top... >>>> --> >>> >>> I might just remove “traditional” in all three cases. >>> >>> Thanks, >>> >>> - J >>> >>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Thank you. >>>> >>>> RFC Editor/kf/mf >>>> >>>> *****IMPORTANT***** >>>> >>>> Updated 2023/09/08 >>>> >>>> RFC Author(s): >>>> -------------- >>>> >>>> Instructions for Completing AUTH48 >>>> >>>> Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-ietf-s… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-ietf-s… Peterson, Jon
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- Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-i… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-i… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-i… Ben Campbell
- Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-i… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-i… Peterson, Jon
- Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-i… Murray S. Kucherawy
- Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-i… Ben Campbell
- Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-i… Peterson, Jon
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-ietf-s… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-ietf-s… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-ietf-s… Ben Campbell
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-ietf-s… Chris Wendt
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-ietf-s… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-ietf-s… Peterson, Jon
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-ietf-s… Megan Ferguson