Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9475 <draft-ietf-stir-messaging-08> for your review

Megan Ferguson <mferguson@amsl.com> Tue, 24 October 2023 19:31 UTC

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Greetings,

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> On Oct 16, 2023, at 5:45 PM, Megan Ferguson <mferguson@amsl.com> wrote:
> 
> Greetings,
> 
> *AD - please review the following question and provide guidance to the authors on this point:
> 
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] We have added RFC 4648 as an Informative Reference. Please let us know if it should be Normative instead.
>>> 
>>> Original: 
>>>  The subsequent characters in the claim value are the base64 encoded
>>>  [RFC4648] digest of a canonicalized and concatenated string or binary data
>>>  based MIME body of the message. -->
>>> 
>> 
>> Um, I believe that’s okay as Informative, but I might ask our AD if he agrees.
>> 
> 
> Jon,
> 
> Thank you for your reply.  We have updated accordingly.
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> 
>> On Oct 12, 2023, at 8:34 AM, Peterson, Jon <Jon.Peterson@transunion.com> wrote:
>> 
>> Sorry for the late reply, some comments inline.
>> 
>> 
>>> On Sep 8, 2023, at 4:05 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote:
>>> 
>>> Authors,
>>> 
>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
>>> 
>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please note that the title of the document has been
>>>    updated as follows:
>>> 
>>> Abbreviations have been expanded per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 (“RFC
>>> Style Guide”). Please review.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> Messaging Use Cases and Extensions for STIR
>>> 
>>> Current:
>>> Messaging Use Cases and Extensions for Secure Telephone Identity
>>> Revisited (STIR)
>>> 
>>> -->
>> 
>> OK
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 2)  <!--[rfced] We had two questions about the first sentence in the
>>>     Abstract:
>>> 
>>> a) Should "protocol" or "problem statement" or some other noun follow
>>> the expansion of STIR in this text?  If we cut "STIR" and just read
>>> with the expansion, this sounds a bit odd.
>>> 
>>> b) May we break up this sentence as suggested below for the ease of
>>> the reader?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> Secure Telephone Identity Revisited (STIR) provides a means of
>>> attesting the identity of a telephone caller via a signed token in
>>> order to prevent impersonation of a calling party number, which is a
>>> key enabler for illegal robocalling.
>>> 
>>> Perhaps:
>>> The Secure Telephone Identity Revisited (STIR) protocol provides a
>>> means of attesting the identity of a telephone caller via a signed
>>> token.  This prevents impersonation of a calling party number, which
>>> is a key enabler for illegal robocalling.
>>> 
>> 
>> I think the original is better.
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 3) <!--[rfced] FYI - we have broken up the information in the following
>>>    sentence to make it easier for the reader to digest.  Please let
>>>    us know if these changes have deviated from your intended
>>>    meaning.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>>  For the first case, where SIP negotiates a session where the media
>>>  will be text messages or MIME content, as, for example, with the
>>>  Message Session Relay Protocol (MSRP) [RFC4975], the usage of STIR
>>>  would deviate little from [RFC8224]. 
>>> 
>>> Current:
>>>  In the first case described in Section 3, SIP negotiates a
>>>  session in which the media will be text messages or MIME content, as,
>>>  for example, with the Message Session Relay Protocol (MSRP)
>>>  [RFC4975].  This usage of STIR would deviate little from [RFC8224].
>>> -->
>>> 
>> 
>> I would eliminate “described in Section 3” since this is the first sentence of Section 3.1 – we know where we are.  “In the first case, Sip negotiates a session” etc. Otherwise current is fine.
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> 4) <!--[rfced] Can the timestamp itself order things?  Or can the
>>>    timestamp be used to order things?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> ...duplicate messages are easily detected,
>>>  and the timestamp can order messages displayed to the user inbox in a
>>>  way that precludes showing stale messages as fresh.
>>> 
>>> Perhaps:
>>> ...duplicate messages are easily detected, and the timestamp can be
>>>  used to order messages displayed in the user inbox in a way that
>>>  precludes showing stale messages as fresh.
>>> -->
>>> 
>> 
>> Your perhaps option looks good.
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> 5) <!--[rfced] FYI - We have updated the expansion of MMS as follows to
>>>    match more common use in recent RFCs.  Please let us know any
>>>    objections:
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> multimedia message system (MMS)
>>> 
>>> Current:
>>> Multimedia Messaging Service (MMS)
>>> -->
>> 
>> OK
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 6) <!--[rfced] How may we update this text for clarity?  We do not see
>>>    "profiles" in RFC 8226.  (Note that we have made the change from
>>>    "profiles defines" to "profiles define" pending more
>>>    information).
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> The [RFC8226] STIR certificate profiles defines...
>>> 
>>> Perhaps:
>>> "Secure Telephone Identity Credentials: Certificates" [RFC8226] defines...
>>> 
>>> Or perhaps:
>>> The STIR certificate profiles defined in [RFC8226]...
>>> -->
>>> 
>> 
>> I think “profiles” and “defines” in the original were just a redundant typo. Your “Perhaps” is correct: “[RFC8226] defines”.
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> 7) <!--[rfced] This sentence describes a lot of things being "contain"ed.
>>>    Might a rephrase benefit the reader?  If so, please let us know
>>>    how we may update.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> As the "orig" and "dest" field of PASSporTs may contain URIs
>>> containing SIP URIs without telephone numbers, the STIR for messaging
>>> mechanism contained in this specification is not inherently
>>> restricted to the use of telephone numbers.
>>> 
>>> 
>> 
>> Yeah that’s pretty bad. How about:
>> 
>> As the “orig” and “dest” field of PASSporTs may contain SIP URIs without telephone numbers, the STIR for…
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 8) <!--[rfced] May we update the following to avoid awkward hyphenation?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> This specification offers no guidance on certification authorities who
>>> are appropriate to sign for non-telephone number "orig" values.
>>> 
>>> Perhaps:
>>> This specification offers no guidance on certification authorities who
>>> are appropriate to sign for "orig" values that are not for use with
>>> telephone numbers.
>>> 
>> 
>> How about: This specification offers no guidance on appropriate certification authorities for desigining “orig” values that do not contain telephone numbers.
>> 
>> 
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 9) <!--[rfced] Please note the following about the IANA Considerations
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>>> 
>>> a) Please note that we have changed IESG to be IETF for the Change
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>>> 
>>> "Note: in accordance with recent practice, the change controller for
>>> this registration has been changed from the IESG to the IETF."
>> 
>> OK
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> b) We have cut the URL to the registry mentioned in Section 6.2 to
>>> match Section 6.1.  Please let us know any objections.
>> 
>> OK
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> c) We have removed the quote marks as they do not appear in the
>>> corresponding registries.
>> 
>> OK
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] We have added RFC 4648 as an Informative Reference. Please let us know if it should be Normative instead.
>>> 
>>> Original: 
>>>  The subsequent characters in the claim value are the base64 encoded
>>>  [RFC4648] digest of a canonicalized and concatenated string or binary data
>>>  based MIME body of the message. -->
>>> 
>> 
>> Um, I believe that’s okay as Informative, but I might ask our AD if he agrees.
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> 11) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions related to terminology use
>>>    throughout the document:
>>> 
>>> a) We note the use of the following similar terms:
>>> 
>>> SIP Identity header
>>> Identity header
>>> Identity
>>> identity
>>> 
>>> Please review these instances and let us know if any updates are
>>> necessary for clarity (e.g., should all "Identity header"s be called
>>> "SIP Identity header"s).
>>> 
>> 
>> I mean, I tend to favor being readable over strict on these matters. Scanning through the doc, I think it’s clear that referring to “Identity” in these contexts means the SIP Identity header from the remainder of the sentences in question.
>> 
>> 
>>> b) We see both:
>>> 
>>> "orig" field
>>> "orig" values
>>> 
>>> Should the latter be made "orig" field values?
>> 
>> Where “orig” and “dest” and “iat” are referred to as “fields” (like in 4) that should more properly be “claims”. Claims have a value, so talking about the ‘“orig” value’ is fine. But we should say “claims” instead of “fields” for the few instances where PASSporT elements are referred to as “fields”:
>> 
>> … the “dest” field of the PASSporT …
>> 
>> … so that the “iat” field can be …
>> 
>> … As the “orig” and “dest” field of…
>> 
>> And also the last sentence in 1:  … that specifies new fields for use in PASSporTs…
>> 
>> Those should be “claim” or “claims.” (No changes to places where “Identity field” appears, though).
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> c) We see the following uses of "baseline":
>>> 
>>>  i) At a high level, baseline PASSporT [RFC8225] claims provide similar
>>>  value to...
>>> 
>>>  ii) Current usage of baseline [RFC8224] Identity is largely confined to
>>>  INVITE requests that initiate telephone calls.
>>> 
>>>  iii) Per baseline [RFC8224], this specifications leaves it to local policy
>>>  to determine how messages are handled after verification succeeds or
>>>  fails.
>> 
>> “Baseline” is being used in all three of cases in its naïve sense, to mean just “as the specification is written.” I would just eliminate the word in all three cases, it isn’t adding much value. 
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> For i), we see the use of "baseline claims" in RFC 8225, so we would
>>> simply suggest moving the citation tag as follows:
>>> 
>>>  Perhaps:
>>>  At a high level, baseline PASSporT claims (see [RFC8225]) provide similar
>>>  value to...
>>> 
>>> For ii), we note that "baseline Identity" is not mentioned in RFC
>>> 8224.  Please review this text and let us know how to update.
>>> 
>>> For iii), we see RFC 8225 referred to as "the baseline PASSporT
>>> specification" in RFC 8224.  Please review this text and let us know
>>> how to update.
>>> 
>>>  Perhaps:
>>>  Per the guidance in the baseline PASSporT specification [RFC8225], this
>>>  specification leaves it to local policy to determine how messages
>>>  are handled after verification succeeds or fails.
>>> 
>>> d) We see both PASSporT Type and PASSporT type.  We updated to use the
>>> lowercase "type" throughout.  Please let us know any objections.
>> 
>> OK
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 12) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the
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>>> For example, please consider whether the following should be updated:
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>>> 
>>> ...authorized to use the calling party number (or, for native SIP cases,...
>> 
>> I would delete “native”, yes.
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> In addition, please consider whether "tradition" should be updated for
>>> clarity.  While the NIST website
>>> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.nist.gov/nist-research-library/nist-technical-series-publications-author-instructions*table1__;Iw!!N14HnBHF!-Go8giMg3oYK7EPYfukRw6EkY7aHj0rvYHbmI9FCnanwAGz_gT_tRpk8nMNJ7HikD5JH3xv-VATz_97iC0E6QT4$ >
>>> indicates that this term is potentially biased, it is also ambiguous.
>>> "Tradition" is a subjective term, as it is not the same for everyone.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> ...value to number-based messaging as they do to traditional
>>> telephone...
>>> 
>>> ...treatment that differs from traditional delivery expectations of
>>> SIP...
>>> 
>>> ...the traditional telephone network and those based on
>>> over-the-top...
>>> -->
>> 
>> I might just remove “traditional” in all three cases.
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> 
>> - J
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Thank you.
>>> 
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>>> 
>>> Diff file of the text:
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>>> 
>>> Diff of the XML: 
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>>> 
>>> The following files are provided to facilitate creation of your own 
>>> diff files of the XML.  
>>> 
>>> Initial XMLv3 created using XMLv2 as input:
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>>> 
>>> XMLv3 file that is a best effort to capture v3-related format updates 
>>> only: 
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>>> 
>>> 
>>> Tracking progress
>>> -----------------
>>> 
>>> The details of the AUTH48 status of your document are here:
>>>  https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9475__;!!N14HnBHF!-Go8giMg3oYK7EPYfukRw6EkY7aHj0rvYHbmI9FCnanwAGz_gT_tRpk8nMNJ7HikD5JH3xv-VATz_97izp6fZsY$ 
>>> 
>>> Please let us know if you have any questions.  
>>> 
>>> Thank you for your cooperation,
>>> 
>>> RFC Editor
>>> 
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> RFC9475 (draft-ietf-stir-messaging-08)
>>> 
>>> Title            : Messaging Use Cases and Extensions for STIR
>>> Author(s)        : J. Peterson, C. Wendt
>>> WG Chair(s)      : Ben Campbell, Robert Sparks, Russ Housley
>>> Area Director(s) : Murray Kucherawy, Francesca Palombini
>>> 
>>> 
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