Re: [auth48] [EXTERNAL] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9406 <draft-ietf-tcpm-hystartplusplus-14> for your review
Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com> Mon, 01 May 2023 23:19 UTC
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Subject: Re: [auth48] [EXTERNAL] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9406 <draft-ietf-tcpm-hystartplusplus-14> for your review
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Hi, Yi. This text is not a grammatical error; it is referred to as "subjunctive mood". It is often used in RFCs. If you prefer that subjunctive mood not be used in this document*, please let us know, and we will remove any instances of subjunctive mood that we find. * This phrase itself is an example of subjunctive mood. Thank you. RFC Editor/lb > On May 1, 2023, at 4:02 PM, Yi Huang <huanyi@microsoft.com> wrote: > > Thanks for adding the street full address. > > In section 4.3, there's a grammatical error that needs to be corrected. > Original: > "It is RECOMMENDED that a HyStart++ implementation use the following" > > Proposal: > "It is RECOMMENDED that a HyStart++ implementation uses the following" > From: Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com> > Sent: Monday, May 1, 2023 3:49 PM > To: Yi Huang <huanyi@microsoft.com> > Cc: pravb.ietf@gmail.com <pravb.ietf@gmail.com>; Matt Olson <maolson@microsoft.com>; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; tcpm-ads@ietf.org <tcpm-ads@ietf.org>; tcpm-chairs@ietf.org <tcpm-chairs@ietf.org>; tuexen@fh-muenster.de <tuexen@fh-muenster.de>; Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> > Subject: Re: [EXTERNAL] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9406 <draft-ietf-tcpm-hystartplusplus-14> for your review > Hi, Yi. No worries, and thank you for this prompt reply as well! > > We have made further updates per your notes below. Per your address listing, we also included "One Microsoft Way". Please let us know if Matt's street address should be different. > > The latest files are posted here. 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I pasted it in the wrong place. > > > > • "HyStart exit" should be changed to "slow start exit", which refers to the pseudocode "exit slow start and enter CSS". > > • ECN is Explicit Congestion Notification. > > One minor issue in "Authros' Addresses" section, could you please add "Redmond, WA 98052" to Matt Olson's address to be consistent with other authors' info? > > Original: > > Matt Olson > > Microsoft > > Phone: +1 425 538 8598 > > Email: maolson@microsoft.com > > > > Proposal: > > > > Matt Olson > > Microsoft > > Redmond, WA 98052 > > Phone: +1 425 538 8598 > > Email: maolson@microsoft.com > > > > --------------------------------------------------- > > Thanks, > > Yi > > > > From: Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com> > > Sent: Monday, May 1, 2023 3:21 PM > > To: Yi Huang <huanyi@microsoft.com> > > Cc: pravb.ietf@gmail.com <pravb.ietf@gmail.com>; Matt Olson <maolson@microsoft.com>; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; tcpm-ads@ietf.org <tcpm-ads@ietf.org>; tcpm-chairs@ietf.org <tcpm-chairs@ietf.org>; tuexen@fh-muenster.de <tuexen@fh-muenster.de>; Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> > > Subject: Re: [EXTERNAL] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9406 <draft-ietf-tcpm-hystartplusplus-14> for your review > > [You don't often get email from lbartholomew@amsl.com. Learn why this is important athttps://aka.ms/LearnAboutSenderIdentification ] > > > > Hi, Yi. Thank you for your prompt reply! > > > > We have updated this document per your notes below. > > > > A couple quick follow-up items for you: > > > > It appears that our question 4)b) (re. not finding "cssBaselineMinRtt" mentioned in any other RFC) was answered by this reply to question 5): > > > > >> 5) <!-- [rfced] Section 4.2: We defined "ECN" as "Explicit Congestion > > >> Notification" for ease of the reader. If this definition is > > >> incorrect, please provide the correct definition of "ECN". > > >> > > >> Original: > > >> If loss or ECN-marking is observed anytime during standard slow start > > >> or CSS, enter congestion avoidance by setting ssthresh to current > > >> cwnd. > > >> > > >> Currently: > > >> If loss or Explicit Congestion Notification (ECN) marking is observed > > >> at any time during standard slow start or CSS, enter congestion > > >> avoidance by setting the ssthresh to the current cwnd. --> > > > > > > It's referred a few paragraphs below. > > > > > > In "For CSS rounds where at least N_RTT_SAMPLE RTT samples have been obtained, check if current round's minRTT drops below baseline indicating that HyStart exit was spurious:", the word, "baseline" refers to cssBaselineMinRtt. I suggest we change the line to "For CSS rounds where at least N_RTT_SAMPLE RTT samples have been obtained, check if current round's minRTT drops below the baseline, cssBaselineMinRtt, indicating that HyStart exit was spurious:"? > > > > First, apologies for not spotting this earlier and asking about it: Should "HyStart exit" be "HyStart++ exit"? > > > > Second, please let us know if our expansion of "ECN" as "Explicit Congestion Notification" is correct. 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> > > > RFC Editor/lb > > > > > On Apr 28, 2023, at 8:54 PM, Yi Huang <huanyi@microsoft.com> wrote: > > > > > > Hi Lynne, > > > > > > Thanks a lot for reviewing and editing the doc. I have inlined our answers. > > > > > > Thanks, > > > Yi > > > > > > > > > From: Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com> > > > Sent: Thursday, April 27, 2023 3:22 PM > > > To: pravb.ietf@gmail.com <pravb.ietf@gmail.com>; Yi Huang <huanyi@microsoft.com>; Matt Olson <maolson@microsoft.com> > > > Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; tcpm-ads@ietf.org <tcpm-ads@ietf.org>; tcpm-chairs@ietf.org <tcpm-chairs@ietf.org>; tuexen@fh-muenster.de<tuexen@fh-muenster.de>; Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org<auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> > > > Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9406 <draft-ietf-tcpm-hystartplusplus-14> for your review > > > [Some people who received this message don't often get email from lbartholomew@amsl.com. Learn why this is important athttps://aka.ms/LearnAboutSenderIdentification ] > > > > > > Authors, > > > > > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > > > > > > 1) <!-- [rfced] Document title, Abstract, and Introduction: As the term > > > "HyStart" has not been used in any published RFCs to date and the > > > word "hybrid" is not used in this document, would it be helpful to > > > define HyStart++ for readers? > > > > > > Original: > > > HyStart++: Modified Slow Start for TCP > > > ... > > > This document describes HyStart++, a simple modification to the slow > > > start phase of congestion control algorithms. > > > ... > > > HyStart++ uses increase in round-trip delay as a signal to exit slow > > > start before potential packet loss occurs as a result of overshoot. > > > This is one of two algorithms specified in [HyStart]. > > > > > > Perhaps: > > > HyStart++: Modified "Hybrid Start" Slow Start Algorithm for TCP > > > ... > > > This document describes HyStart++, a simple modification to the > > > "Hybrid Start" slow start phase of congestion control algorithms. > > > ... > > > HyStart++, which is a modified "Hybrid Start" slow start algorithm, > > > uses an increase in round-trip delay as a signal to exit slow > > > start before potential packet loss occurs as a result of > > > overshoot. This is one of two algorithms specified in [HyStart]. --> > > > > > > How about in the introduction we modify seocnd para as: > > > HyStart++ builds upon Hybrid Start (HyStart) originally described in [HyStart]. HyStart++ uses increase in round-trip delay as a signal to exit slow start before potential packet loss occurs as a result of overshoot. > > > > > > > > > 2) <!-- [rfced] Section 1: In this current text, "This is one of two > > > algorithms" appears to refer to HyStart++. However, we do not see > > > HyStart++ mentioned anywhere in [HyStart]. Also, we only see one > > > algorithm defined in [HyStart]: "We propose a new slow start > > > algorithm, called Hybrid Start (HyStart) ..."). > > > > > > How can this text be clarified for readers? For example, would > > > "[HyStart] specifies two algorithms (a "Delay Increase" algorithm and > > > an "Inter-Packet Arrival" algorithm) to be run in parallel to detect > > > that the sending rate has reached capacity" from Section 4.1 also > > > apply to this text here in Section 1? > > > > > > Original (the previous sentence and the next sentence are included > > > for context): > > > HyStart++ uses increase in round-trip delay as a signal to exit slow > > > start before potential packet loss occurs as a result of overshoot. > > > This is one of two algorithms specified in [HyStart]. After the slow > > > start exit, a new Conservative Slow Start (CSS) phase is used to > > > determine whether the slow start exit was premature and to resume > > > slow start. --> > > > > > > To be clear, Hystart++ itself is not mentioned in [HyStart]. Hystart++ uses the "delay increase" algorithm in [Hystart] for detecting a safe exit point for slow start. Can we just rephrase " This is one of two algorithms specified in [HyStart]" to "This is one of two algorithms specified in [HyStart] for finding a safe exit point for slow start."? > > > > > > 3) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "type" attribute of each sourcecode > > > element in the XML file to ensure correctness. 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We get > > > the following warning: > > > > > > Warning: Too long line found (L207), 7 characters longer than 72 characters: > > > Compute an RTT Threshold clamped between MIN_RTT_THRESH and MAX_RTT_THRESH > > > Warning: Too long line found (L208), 20 characters longer than 72 characters: > > > RttThresh = max(MIN_RTT_THRESH, min(lastRoundMinRTT / MIN_RTT_DIVISOR, MAX_RTT_THRESH)) > > > > > > Please let us know where line breaks should be placed. > > > > > > Original (the line break after "DIVISOR," is introduced by > > > our Terminal-window-line-length constraint): > > > Compute a RTT Threshold clamped between MIN_RTT_THRESH and MAX_RTT_THRESH > > > RttThresh = max(MIN_RTT_THRESH, min(lastRoundMinRTT / MIN_RTT_DIVISOR, MAX_RTT_THRESH)) > > > > > > Possibly: > > > Compute an RTT Threshold clamped between MIN_RTT_THRESH and > > > MAX_RTT_THRESH > > > RttThresh = max(MIN_RTT_THRESH, > > > min(lastRoundMinRTT / MIN_RTT_DIVISOR, MAX_RTT_THRESH)) > > > > > > b) We do not see "cssBaselineMinRtt" used in any RFC. Will this > > > parameter be clear to readers? > > > > > > Original: > > > cssBaselineMinRtt = currentRoundMinRTT > > > ... > > > if (currentRoundMinRTT < cssBaselineMinRtt) > > > cssBaselineMinRtt = infinity --> > > > > > > I think we can remove "Compute an RTT Threshold clamped between MIN_RTT_THRESH and MAX_RTT_THRESH" as it's just an explanation of the following line, which is clear enough. The suggested line break looks good to me. > > > > > > 5) <!-- [rfced] Section 4.2: We defined "ECN" as "Explicit Congestion > > > Notification" for ease of the reader. If this definition is > > > incorrect, please provide the correct definition of "ECN". > > > > > > Original: > > > If loss or ECN-marking is observed anytime during standard slow start > > > or CSS, enter congestion avoidance by setting ssthresh to current > > > cwnd. > > > > > > Currently: > > > If loss or Explicit Congestion Notification (ECN) marking is observed > > > at any time during standard slow start or CSS, enter congestion > > > avoidance by setting the ssthresh to the current cwnd. --> > > > > > > It's referred a few paragraphs below. > > > > > > In "For CSS rounds where at least N_RTT_SAMPLE RTT samples have been obtained, check if current round's minRTT drops below baseline indicating that HyStart exit was spurious:", the word, "baseline" refers to cssBaselineMinRtt. I suggest we change the line to "For CSS rounds where at least N_RTT_SAMPLE RTT samples have been obtained, check if current round's minRTT drops below the baseline, cssBaselineMinRtt, indicating that HyStart exit was spurious:"? > > > > > > 6) <!-- [rfced] Section 5: We changed "As of February 2023" to "At the > > > time of this writing". If this is incorrect, please provide > > > clarifying text. > > > > > > Original: > > > As of February 2023, HyStart++ as described in this document has been > > > default enabled for all TCP connections in the Windows operating > > > system for over two years with pacing disabled and an actual L = 8. > > > > > > Currently: > > > At the time of this writing, HyStart++ as described in this document > > > has been default enabled for all TCP connections in the Windows > > > operating system for over two years with pacing disabled and an > > > actual L = 8. --> > > > Correct > > > > > > > > > 7) <!-- [rfced] Section 5: Will the meaning of "HyStart++ draft 01" be > > > clear to readers? If not, please provide clarifying text. > > > > > > Original: > > > In an A/B test where we compare HyStart++ draft 01 to traditional > > > slow start across a large Windows device population, out of 52 > > > billion TCP connections, 0.7% of connections move from 1 RTO to 0 > > > RTOs and another 0.7% connections move from 2 RTOs to 1 RTO with > > > HyStart++. --> > > > > > > I would say we remove draft 01, as its not useful to the reader to implement an earlier version of the algorithm: > > > > > > "In an A/B test where we compared an implementation of HyStart++ (based on an earlier draft of this document) to traditional > > > slow start across a large Windows device population," > > > > > > 8) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the > > > online Style Guide at > > > <https://nam06.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fstyleguide%2Fpart2%2F%23inclusive_language&data=05%7C01%7Chuanyi%40microsoft.com%7C0246c4008b854c06891708db4a96551b%7C72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7C1%7C0%7C638185782323801462%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=apb60%2BZtlQv%2FotcFvH89Pl27am16yfoSZHV9MtGAX9A%3D&reserved=0>, > > > and let us know if any changes are needed. > > > > > > In addition, please consider whether "traditional" should be updated > > > for clarity. In this document, could "standard slow start" (as seen > > > in Section 4.2) be used instead of "traditional slow start"? > > > > > > While the NIST website > > > (<https://nam06.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.nist.gov%2Fnist-research-library%2Fnist-technical-series-publications-author-instructions%23table1&data=05%7C01%7Chuanyi%40microsoft.com%7C0246c4008b854c06891708db4a96551b%7C72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7C1%7C0%7C638185782323801462%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=UajOm37PVCXQ4F8F%2FpS%2BVKYe%2Bw0HATWh1JLLJzbt54A%3D&reserved=0>) > > > indicates that this term is potentially biased, it is also ambiguous. > > > "Tradition" is a subjective term, as it is not the same for everyone. --> > > > > > > Agreed. Standard slow start is better. > > > > > > 9) <!-- [rfced] The following terms were used inconsistently in this > > > document. We chose to use the latter forms. 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- [auth48] *[AD] Re: [EXTERNAL] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9… Lynne Bartholomew
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