Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9466 <draft-ietf-pim-assert-packing-12> for your review

Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 06 October 2023 15:04 UTC

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Subject: Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9466 <draft-ietf-pim-assert-packing-12> for your review
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Hi!

Please consider the document approved from my part.

Thanks!

Alvaro.

On October 6, 2023 at 10:05:27 AM, Sarah Tarrant (starrant@amsl.com) wrote:

Hello Toerless and Alvaro,

Thank you for your replies. We have updated the document accordingly.

Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do not
make changes once it has been published as an RFC. Contact us with any
further updates or with your approval of the document in its current form.
We will await approvals from each author prior to moving forward in the
publication process.

Updated XML file:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9466.xml

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https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9466.txt
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9466.pdf

Diff file showing all changes made during AUTH48:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9466-auth48diff.html

Comprehensive Diffs:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9466-diff.html
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9466-rfcdiff.html (side-by-side diff)

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For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9466

Thank you,

RFC Editor/st

> On Oct 6, 2023, at 6:52 AM, Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> On October 5, 2023 at 2:11:08 PM, Sarah Tarrant wrote:
>
> Hi Sarah!
>
>> *Alvaro, as AD, please review the second bullet in Section 3.3.1 and let
us
>> know if you approve. This change is best viewed in this diff file:
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9466-auth48diff.html.
>
> Yes, it's ok to take out the normative recommendation.
>
> Just a nit: implementations don't "want" anything, they are
> programmed to do something.
>
> s/an implementation wants to send/an implementation sends
>
> Thanks!!
>
> Alvaro.