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Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9472 <draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-18> for your review

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Subject: Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9472 <draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-18> for your review
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On 8 Sep 2023, at 19:26, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote:

> Authors and *AD,
>
> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
>

>
> 17) <!-- [rfced] FYI: We have added expansions for the following abbreviations
> per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review each
> expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness.
>
>    Access Control Lists (ACLs)
>    Constrained Application Protocol (CoAP)
>    Internet of Things (IoT)
> -->
>
>
> 18) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online
> Style Guide <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
> and let us know if any changes are needed.
>
> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should
> still be reviewed as a best practice.
> -->
>

FWIW, I did a pass through to match against the NIST inclusive language guidance and did not find anything that needed to be addressed.  Future changes may change that (not likely, but maybe).

Thanks
Scott




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