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Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9436 <draft-ietf-pim-rfc8736bis-04> for your review

Alvaro Retana <alvaro.retana@futurewei.com> Tue, 22 August 2023 22:56 UTC

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From: Alvaro Retana <alvaro.retana@futurewei.com>
To: Sarah Tarrant <starrant@amsl.com>
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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9436 <draft-ietf-pim-rfc8736bis-04> for your review
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On August 22, 2023 at 5:24:58 PM, Sarah Tarrant (starrant@amsl.com<mailto:starrant@amsl.com>) wrote:

Sarah:

Hi!

...
>> d) In this document, it seems that the capped "Flag Bits" is used for the name
>> of the field and the lowercase "flag bits" is used in general text. Please
>> review "Flag Bits" in this sentence. Should this read "Flag Bits field" or
>> "flag bits"? Or is the current okay?
>>
>> Original:
>> In Section 5, this document specifies the use of the Flag
>> Bits for message types 13, 14, and 15 in order to extend the PIM type
>> space.
>> -->
> Well….
> A couple of paragraphs above (second paragraph in the Introduction) we wrote this: "This document refers to the bits in the Reserved field of the common PIM header [RFC7761] as "PIM message type Flag Bits" or, simply, "Flag Bits”…” But we also wrote (in Section 3): "This document updates the definition of the Reserved field and refers to that field as "PIM message type Flag Bits" or, simply, "Flag Bits”.” :-(
> We didn't use "PIM message type Flag Bits” anywhere else.
> The text in Section 3 should be used in the Introduction as “Flag Bits” refers to the field (not the bits).
>
> To your question. In the sentence above please use “Flag Bits field”.

Sorry I wasn’t clear on this point.

The text mentioned above, in the Introduction and in Section 3, are inconsistent.  They should both be updated to read: “This document updates the definition of the Reserved field and refers to it as the "Flag Bits field”…”

Thanks!

Alvaro.

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