Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9314 <draft-ietf-bfd-rfc9127-bis-04> for your review

Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> Fri, 16 September 2022 15:15 UTC

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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9314 <draft-ietf-bfd-rfc9127-bis-04> for your review
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Hi Authors,

Vero - Thank you for you reply. We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page.

We have now received all necessary approvals and consider AUTH48 complete:
  https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9314

Thank you for your attention and guidance during the AUTH48 process.
We will move this document forward in the publication process at this time.

RFC Editor/ap

> On Sep 15, 2022, at 7:15 PM, Veronique ZHENG Lianshu <veronique_cheng@hotmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Hello Alanna,
> 
> I approve all the updates.
> Sorry for the late reply.
> 
> BR,
> Vero
> From: Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com>
> Sent: Tuesday, 13 September 2022 7:03 AM
> To: Santosh P K <santosh.pallagatti@gmail.com>; Reshad Rehman <reshad@yahoo.com>
> Cc: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>; Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com>; RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; Vero Zheng (vero.zheng@huawei.com) <veronique_cheng@hotmail.com>; bfd-ads@ietf.org <bfd-ads@ietf.org>; bfd-chairs@ietf.org <bfd-chairs@ietf.org>; Jeffrey Haas <jhaas@pfrc.org>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>
> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9314 <draft-ietf-bfd-rfc9127-bis-04> for your review
>  
> Greetings,
> 
> Thank you for your replies. We have noted Reshad’s and Santosh’s approvals on the AUTH48 status page:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9314
> 
> Once we receive approval from Vero, we will move forward with the publication process.
> 
> Best regards,
> RFC Editor/ap
> 
> > On Sep 12, 2022, at 8:34 AM, Santosh P K <santosh.pallagatti@gmail.com> wrote:
> > 
> > Hello Alanna,
> >      Sorry for the late reply. I've reviewed the updates and approved them all.
> > 
> > Thanks
> > Santosh P K
> > 
> > 
> > 
> > On Thu, Sep 1, 2022 at 5:53 AM Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> wrote:
> > Hi Mahesh and Greg,
> > 
> > Thank you for your replies.  We have updated as requested and noted your approvals on the AUTH48 status page.
> > 
> > The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9314.xml
> >  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9314.txt
> >  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9314.html
> >  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9314.pdf
> > 
> > The relevant diff files have been posted here:
> >  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9314-diff.html (comprehensive diff)
> >  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9314-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes)
> > 
> > We will await approvals from the remaining parties listed on the AUTH48 status page below prior to moving this document forward in the publication process.
> > 
> > For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> >  https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9314
> > 
> > Thank you,
> > RFC Editor/ap
> > 
> > > On Aug 30, 2022, at 12:31 PM, Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> wrote:
> > > 
> > > Dear RFC Editor,
> > > I don't have any updates to the clarifications shared by Mahesh (thank you, Mahesh).
> > > I've reviewed the proposed updates and approved them all. Please let me know if there are any further questions and/or actions I need to take.
> > > 
> > > Regards,
> > > Greg
> > > 
> > > On Tue, Aug 30, 2022 at 11:10 AM Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com> wrote:
> > > Hi RFC Editor,
> > > 
> > > I have reviewed the .txt diffs, the IANA Considerations, contact information for the authors, and I approve of the changes.
> > > 
> > > I have also responded separately to the questions raised by you.
> > > 
> > > Thanks.
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> > >> RFC 9314 (draft-ietf-bfd-rfc9127-bis-04)
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> > >> Title            : YANG Data Model for Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD)
> > >> Author(s)        : M. Jethanandani, Ed., R. Rahman, Ed., L. Zheng, Ed., S. Pallagatti, G. Mirsky
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