Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9314 <draft-ietf-bfd-rfc9127-bis-04> for your review

Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> Mon, 12 September 2022 21:03 UTC

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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9314 <draft-ietf-bfd-rfc9127-bis-04> for your review
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Greetings,

Thank you for your replies. We have noted Reshad’s and Santosh’s approvals on the AUTH48 status page:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9314

Once we receive approval from Vero, we will move forward with the publication process.

Best regards,
RFC Editor/ap

> On Sep 12, 2022, at 8:34 AM, Santosh P K <santosh.pallagatti@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Hello Alanna,
>      Sorry for the late reply. I've reviewed the updates and approved them all.
> 
> Thanks
> Santosh P K
> 
> 
> 
> On Thu, Sep 1, 2022 at 5:53 AM Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> wrote:
> Hi Mahesh and Greg,
> 
> Thank you for your replies.  We have updated as requested and noted your approvals on the AUTH48 status page.
> 
> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9314.xml
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9314.txt
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9314.html
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9314.pdf
> 
> The relevant diff files have been posted here:
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9314-diff.html (comprehensive diff)
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9314-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes)
> 
> We will await approvals from the remaining parties listed on the AUTH48 status page below prior to moving this document forward in the publication process.
> 
> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9314
> 
> Thank you,
> RFC Editor/ap
> 
> > On Aug 30, 2022, at 12:31 PM, Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> wrote:
> > 
> > Dear RFC Editor,
> > I don't have any updates to the clarifications shared by Mahesh (thank you, Mahesh).
> > I've reviewed the proposed updates and approved them all. Please let me know if there are any further questions and/or actions I need to take.
> > 
> > Regards,
> > Greg
> > 
> > On Tue, Aug 30, 2022 at 11:10 AM Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com> wrote:
> > Hi RFC Editor,
> > 
> > I have reviewed the .txt diffs, the IANA Considerations, contact information for the authors, and I approve of the changes.
> > 
> > I have also responded separately to the questions raised by you.
> > 
> > Thanks.
> > 
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> >> --------------------------------------
> >> RFC 9314 (draft-ietf-bfd-rfc9127-bis-04)
> >> 
> >> Title            : YANG Data Model for Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD)
> >> Author(s)        : M. Jethanandani, Ed., R. Rahman, Ed., L. Zheng, Ed., S. Pallagatti, G. Mirsky
> >> WG Chair(s)      : Jeffrey Haas, Reshad Rahman
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