Re: [auth48] [Document Shepherd] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9273 <draft-irtf-nwcrg-nwc-ccn-reqs-09> for your review

[Marie-Jose Montpetit <[e-mail]>]

I thought I had sent it. Yes I approve.

Marie-José Montpetit, Ph.D.
[e-mail]



From: Alanna Paloma <[e-mail]> <[e-mail]>
Reply: Alanna Paloma <[e-mail]> <[e-mail]>
Date: August 10, 2022 at 11:15:01 AM
To: [e-mail] <[e-mail]> <[e-mail]>
Cc: Cedric Westphal <[e-mail]>
<[e-mail]>, Kazuhisa Matsuzono <[e-mail]>
<[e-mail]>, Hitoshi Asaeda <[e-mail]>
<[e-mail]>, RFC Errata System <[e-mail]>
<[e-mail]>, [e-mail] <[e-mail]> <[e-mail]>,
[e-mail] <[e-mail]>
<[e-mail]>
Subject:  Re: [Document Shepherd] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9273 for your review

Hi Marie-Jose,

We do not believe we’ve heard from you regarding the added sentence in the
last paragraph of Section 1. Please review the diff below and let us know
if this update to the text is approved.
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9273-auth48diff.html

The other files can be seen here (please refresh):
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9273.txt
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9273.pdf
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9273.html
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9273.xml

https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9273-diff.html (comprehensive diff)
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9273-rfcdiff.html (comprehensive diff
with changes side by side )

The AUTH48 status page can be seen here:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9273

Best regards,
RFC Editor/ap

> On Aug 3, 2022, at 12:19 PM, Alanna Paloma <[e-mail]> wrote:
>
> Hi Marie-Jose,
>
> This is a friendly reminder that we await your review and approval as the
Document Shepherd of the added sentence in the last paragraph of Section 1
in the diff file below.
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9273-auth48diff.html
>
> The other files can be seen here (please refresh):
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9273.txt
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9273.pdf
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9273.html
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9273.xml
>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9273-diff.html (comprehensive diff)
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9273-rfcdiff.html (comprehensive
diff with changes side by side )
>
> The AUTH48 status page can be seen here:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9273
>
> Best regards,
> RFC Editor/ap
>
>> On Jul 27, 2022, at 8:44 AM, Alanna Paloma <[e-mail]> wrote:
>>
>> Hi Cedric,
>>
>> We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page for this document:
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9273
>>
>> Thank you,
>> RFC Editor/ap
>>
>>> On Jul 26, 2022, at 12:38 AM, Cedric Westphal <
[e-mail]> wrote:
>>>
>>> Hi,
>>>
>>> I approve of the latest version.
>>> Thanks all!
>>>
>>> C.
>>>
>>> Get Outlook for Android
>>> From: Alanna Paloma <[e-mail]>
>>> Sent: Tuesday, July 26, 2022 3:55:25 AM
>>> To: Kazuhisa Matsuzono <[e-mail]>
>>> Cc: Hitoshi Asaeda <[e-mail]>; Cedric Westphal <
[e-mail]>; [e-mail] <[e-mail]>;
RFC Errata System <[e-mail]>; [e-mail] <[e-mail]>;
[e-mail] <[e-mail]>
>>> Subject: Re: [Document Shepherd] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9273
<draft-irtf-nwcrg-nwc-ccn-reqs-09> for your review
>>>
>>> Hi Hitoshi and Kazuhisa,
>>>
>>> Thank you for your replies. We have noted your approvals on the AUTH48
status page:
>>>
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>>> Once we receive approvals from Cedric and Marie-Jose, we will move
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>>>
>>> Thank you,
>>> RFC Editor/ap
>>>
>>>> On Jul 25, 2022, at 5:55 PM, Kazuhisa Matsuzono <[e-mail]>
wrote:
>>>>
>>>> Dear Alanna,
>>>>
>>>> Thank you so much for your quick and careful support.
>>>> As the author of this document,
>>>> I approve the document to be put to the publication process.
>>>>
>>>> Best regards,
>>>> Kazuhisa Matsuzono
>>>>
>>>> ----- Original Message -----
>>>>> Hi Cedric, Hitoshi, and *Marie-Jose,
>>>>>
>>>>> Thank you for your replies. We have updated the files accordingly.
>>>>>
>>>>> *Marie-Jose, as the Document Shepherd, please review and approve of
the added
>>>>> sentence in the last paragraph of Section 1 in the diff file below.
>>>>>
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>>>>>
>>>>> Please review the document carefully as documents do not change once
>>>>> published as RFCs.
>>>>>
>>>>> We will await any further changes you may have and approvals from
each author
>>>>> and the *Document Shepherd prior to moving forward in the publication
process.
>>>>>
>>>>> Please see the AUTH48 status page for this document here:
>>>>>
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>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>> RFC Editor/ap
>>>>>
>>>>>> On Jul 19, 2022, at 10:02 PM, Hitoshi Asaeda <[e-mail]>
wrote:
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Hi, again.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> I don't know which version is better, but I'd like to give another
XML file that eliminates space between two references. (The previous one is
formatted with, for example, "... the NC benefits [5] [6]", and this one is
with ".. the NC benefits [5][6]".)
>>>>>> Please use either one of the two.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Regards,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Hitoshi
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> On Jul 20, 2022, at 12:29, Hitoshi Asaeda <[e-mail]>
wrote:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Dear RFC Editor,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> We, authors of this document, updated the XML file to address all
of your suggestions and comments.
>>>>>>> I attached the modified XML file, as well as replied inlines as
below.
>>>>>>> Please confirm whether we completed the editorial revision.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> On Jul 19, 2022, at 14:47, [e-mail] wrote:
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Authors,
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as
necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please ensure that the guidelines listed in
Section 2.1 of RFC 5743
>>>>>>>> have been adhered to in this document. -->
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> We confirmed RFC 5743 and add a sentence, "This document was read
and reviewed by all the active research group members.", in Introduction.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that
appear in the
>>>>>>>> title) for use on
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>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Keywords are added.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] We see a number of author-inserted comments in the
XML file
>>>>>>>> for this document. We are unsure if these have been resolved.
Please review
>>>>>>>> and let us know if these can be deleted or if they need to be
addressed.
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> We removed almost every comment.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] Regarding the decisions to use numeric references,
i.e.,
>>>>>>>> [1]-[40], and to sort them alphabetically by their anchor
attributes
>>>>>>>> (the usage of symrefs="no" and sortrefs="yes" in the original
XML):
>>>>>>>> The effect is that they are not cited in numeric order in the
document
>>>>>>>> (for example, [16] and [19] are the first citations). At this
point,
>>>>>>>> which option do you prefer?
>>>>>>>> A) leave the references as they are.
>>>>>>>> B) change to sortRefs="false" and manually reorder the references
within
>>>>>>>> the references section so that they are cited in numeric order
>>>>>>>> Example (for illustrative purposes only; further reordering would
be required):
>>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>>> C) change to symRefs="true" (while keeping sortRefs="true") so
that the anchor
>>>>>>>> is used for the name, e.g., [Matsuzono17].
>>>>>>>> Example:
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>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thanks. We fixed.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> 5) <!--[rfced] This reference is listed twice. The second one
>>>>>>>> seems to be in error, so may it be removed? This would yield
>>>>>>>> one update within the document as shown below.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Koetter03:
>>>>>>>> [20] Koetter, R. and M. Medard, "An Algebraic Approach to
>>>>>>>> Network Coding", IEEE/ACM Trans. on Networking, vol. 11,
>>>>>>>> no 5, Oct. 2003.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Koetter08:
>>>>>>>> [38] Koetter, R. and F. Kschischang, "An algebraic approach to
>>>>>>>> network coding", IEEE Trans. Netw. vol.11, no.5, October
>>>>>>>> 2003.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> In Section 1:
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> OLD: coherent NC and noncoherent NC [38] [39].
>>>>>>>> NEW: coherent NC and noncoherent NC [20] [39].
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thanks. We fixed.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of
the online
>>>>>>>> Style Guide <
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>>>>>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed. Note that our script
did not flag
>>>>>>>> any words in particular, but this should still be reviewed as a
best practice.
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> We did.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thank you very much for your careful review.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Regards,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Hitoshi
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/ap/ar
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> On Jul 18, 2022, [e-mail] wrote:
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> *****IMPORTANT*****
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Updated 2022/07/18
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> RFC Author(s):
>>>>>>>> --------------
>>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>>> old text
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>>>>>>>> new text
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>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Files
>>>>>>>> -----
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> The files are available here:
>>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Diff file of the text:
>>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>>>
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(side by side)
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Diff of the XML:
>>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> The following files are provided to facilitate creation of your
own
>>>>>>>> diff files of the XML.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Initial XMLv3 created using XMLv2 as input:
>>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> XMLv3 file that is a best effort to capture v3-related format
updates
>>>>>>>> only:
>>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Tracking progress
>>>>>>>> -----------------
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> The details of the AUTH48 status of your document are here:
>>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Please let us know if you have any questions.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Thank you for your cooperation,
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> RFC Editor
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>>>>>> RFC9273 (draft-irtf-nwcrg-nwc-ccn-reqs-09)
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Title : Network Coding for Content-Centric Networking / Named Data
Networking: Considerations and Challenges
>>>>>>>> Author(s) : K. Matsuzono, H. Asaeda, C. Westphal
>>>>>>> <rfc9273-final.xml>
>>>>>> <rfc9273-final2.xml>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>
>>
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