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Authors, While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. 1) <!-- [rfced] FYI - In this sentence, we updated the last item in the series (i.e., "how abstract requests...") to create parallel structure. Please review and let us know any objections. Original: The document discusses the general framework for requesting and operating IETF Network Slices, the characteristics of an IETF Network Slice, the necessary system components and interfaces, and how abstract requests can be mapped to more specific technologies. Current: The document discusses the general framework for requesting and operating IETF Network Slices, the characteristics of an IETF Network Slice, the necessary system components and interfaces, and the mapping of abstract requests to more specific technologies. --> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please review "described...described". Would you like to replace one of these with another word? Original: ...the qualifying term "IETF" is used in this document to limit the scope of the network slices described to network technologies described and standardized by the IETF. Perhaps (change one instance of "described" to "defined"): ...the qualifying term "IETF" is used in this document to limit the scope of the network slices described to network technologies defined and standardized by the IETF. Or (remove first "described"): ...the qualifying term "IETF" is used in this document to limit the scope of network slices to network technologies described and standardized by the IETF. --> 3) <!-- [rfced] May we update "per {IETF Network Slice Service, connectivity construct, and SLOs/SLEs} basis" as follows? Original: The customer and provider may agree on a per {IETF Network Slice Service, connectivity construct, and SLOs/SLEs} basis to police or shape traffic on the AC in both the ingress (CE to PE) direction and egress (PE to CE) direction. Perhaps: The customer and provider may agree to police or shape traffic (based on the specific IETF Network Slice Service, connectivity construct, and SLOs/SLEs) on the AC in both the ingress (CE to PE) direction and egress (PE to CE) direction. --> 4) <!-- [rfced] Would updating as follows improve readability of this long sentence? Original: A clear distinction should be made between the "IETF Network Slice Service" which is the function delivered to the customer (see Section 4.2) and which is agnostic to the technologies and mechanisms used by the service provider, and the "IETF Network Slice" which is the realization of the service in the provider's network achieved by partitioning network resources and by applying certain tools and techniques within the network (see Section 4.1 and Section 7). Perhaps: A clear distinction should be made between the IETF Network Slice Service and the IETF Network Slice: IETF Network Slice Service: The function delivered to the customer (see Section 4.2). It is agnostic to the technologies and mechanisms used by the service provider. IETF Network Slice: The realization of the service in the provider's network achieved by partitioning network resources and by applying certain tools and techniques within the network (see Sections 4.1 and 7). --> 5) <!-- [rfced] Would using bullets make this text easier to read? Or do you prefer the current? Original: That is, in a given IETF Network Slice Service there may be one or more connectivity constructs of the same or different type, each connectivity construct may be between a different subset of SDPs, for a given connectivity construct each sending SDP has its own set of SLOs and SLEs, and the SLOs and SLEs in each set may be different. Perhaps: That is, in a given IETF Network Slice Service: * There may be one or more connectivity constructs of the same or different type. * Each connectivity construct may be between a different subset of SDPs * For a given connectivity construct, each sending SDP has its own set of SLOs and SLEs. * The SLOs and SLEs in each set may be different. --> 6) <!-- [rfced] Please review "That is, and in particular" in the second sentence below (first sentence is included for context). Should this read simply "That is" or "In particular"? Original: From the above, it can be seen that the SLOs of the senders define the SLOs for the receivers on any connectivity construct. That is, and in particular, the network may be expected to handle the traffic volume from a sender to all destinations. This extends to all connectivity constructs in an IETF Network Slice Service. Perhaps: From the above, it can be seen that the SLOs of the senders define the SLOs for the receivers on any connectivity construct. That is, the network may be expected to handle the traffic volume from a sender to all destinations. This extends to all connectivity constructs in an IETF Network Slice Service. Or: From the above, it can be seen that the SLOs of the senders define the SLOs for the receivers on any connectivity construct. In particular, the network may be expected to handle the traffic volume from a sender to all destinations. This extends to all connectivity constructs in an IETF Network Slice Service. --> 7) <!-- [rfced] Please clarify the text starting with "and commercial terms...". Also, may we split up this long sentence to improve readability? Original: The SLA is expressed in terms of a set of SLOs and SLEs that are to be applied for a given connectivity construct between a sending SDP and the set of receiving SDPs, and may describe the extent to which divergence from individual SLOs and SLEs can be tolerated, and commercial terms as well as any consequences for violating these SLOs and SLEs. Perhaps: The SLA is expressed in terms of a set of SLOs and SLEs that are to be applied for a given connectivity construct between a sending SDP and the set of receiving SDPs. The SLA may describe the extent to which divergence from individual SLOs and SLEs can be tolerated, commercial terms, and any consequences for violating these SLOs and SLEs. --> 8) <!-- [rfced] Please clarify how the phrase "and specifying..." connects to the rest of the sentence. Original: Availability will often be expressed along with the time period over which the availability is measured, and specifying the maximum allowed single period of downtime. Perhaps: Availability will often be expressed along with the time period over which the availability is measured and the maximum allowed single period of downtime. Or: Availability will often be expressed along with the time period over which the availability is measured and will specify the maximum allowed single period of downtime. --> 9) <!-- [rfced] Would it be helpful to clarify "e.g., [RFC4303]" by including the name of the mechanism in RFC 4303 as shown below? Similarly, would it helpful to also clarify "for compliance with [HIPAA] or [PCI]" as shown below? Original: This SLE may include a request for encryption (e.g., [RFC4303]) between the two SDPs explicitly to meet the architectural recommendations in [TS33.210] or for compliance with [HIPAA] or [PCI]. Perhaps: This SLE may include a request for encryption (e.g., the Encapsulating Security Payload (ESP) protocol [RFC4303]) between the two SDPs explicitly to meet the architectural recommendations in [TS33.210] or for compliance with the HIPAA Security Rule [HIPAA] or the PCI Data Security Standard (PCI DSS) [PCI]. --> 10) <!-- [rfced] We updated "gRPC/GNMI [I-D.openconfig-rtgwg-gnmi-spec] uses" in the first sentence below as follows. Please review to ensure correctness. Also, would it be helpful to update "ProtoBufs" to "Protocol Buffers" in the second sentence? Or do you prefer the current? Original: * gRPC/GNMI [I-D.openconfig-rtgwg-gnmi-spec] uses a binary encoded programmable interface. ProtoBufs can be used to model gRPC and GNMI data. Current: * gRPC and gRPC Network Management Interface (gNMI) [GNMI] use a binary encoded programmable interface. ProtoBufs can be used to model gRPC and gNMI data. --> 11) <!-- [rfced] We do not see "Network Model" in RFC 8309, though we do see "Service Model", "Network Service Model", and "Network Element Model". Please review and let us know if any updates are needed. Original: These interfaces can be considered in the context of the Service Model and Network Model described in [RFC8309] and, together with the Device Configuration Interface used by the Network Controllers, provides a consistent view of service delivery and realization. --> 12) <!-- [rfced] How may we update the "/" here? Original: Recall that an IETF Network Slice is a service requested by / provided for the customer. Perhaps: Recall that an IETF Network Slice is a service requested by and/or provided for the customer. --> 13) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We see that draft-ietf-teas-enhanced-vpn no longer uses the abbreviation "VPN+" (looks like it was removed in version -16). We have thus removed "VPN+" in the following sentences. See https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-enhanced-vpn/. Original: An enhanced VPN (VPN+) is designed to support the needs of new applications, particularly applications that are associated with 5G services. . . . . . . . [I-D.ietf-teas-enhanced-vpn] describes the framework for Enhanced Virtual Private Network (VPN+) services. Current: An enhanced VPN is designed to support the needs of new applications, particularly applications that are associated with 5G services. . . . . . . . [ENHANCED-VPN] describes the framework for Enhanced Virtual Private Network services. --> 14) <!-- [rfced] Please review the parentheses in "(part of)". Should the parentheses be removed, or should the phrase be moved and revised as shown below? Current: Generate SFC classification rules to identify (part of) the slice traffic that will be bound to an SFC. Perhaps (remove parentheses): Generate SFC classification rules to identify part of the slice traffic that will be bound to an SFC. Or (move and revise parenthetical): Generate SFC classification rules to identify the slice traffic (or part of it) that will be bound to an SFC. --> 15) <!-- [rfced] May we update the text starting with "a robust..." as follows? Current: Furthermore, both the IETF Network Slice Service Interface and the Network Configuration Interface need to be secured with a robust authentication and authorization; and associated auditing mechanism. Perhaps: Furthermore, both the IETF Network Slice Service Interface and the Network Configuration Interface need to be secured with a robust authentication and authorizations mechanism and an associated auditing mechanism. --> 16) <!-- [rfced] Please review whether this "Note:" should be in the <aside> element. It is defined as "a container for content that is semantically less important or tangential to the content that surrounds it" (https://authors.ietf.org/en/rfcxml-vocabulary#aside). Current: Note: See [NGMN_SEC] on 5G network slice security for discussion relevant to this section. --> 17) <!-- [rfced] Please review the URL for the following reference. It returns the error: "Sorry, the post you are looking for is not available". May we update to use one of these URLs below instead? https://www.ngmn.org/publications/description-of-network-slicing-concept.html https://ngmn.org/wp-content/uploads/160113_NGMN_Network_Slicing_v1_0.pdf Original: [NGMN-NS-Concept] NGMN Alliance, "Description of Network Slicing Concept", https://www.ngmn.org/uploads/ media/161010_NGMN_Network_Slicing_framework_v1.0.8.pdf , 2016. --> 18) <!-- [rfced] New versions are available for the following 3GPP references. Would you like to cite the latest version, or would do you prefer the current? a) Latest version is 18.4.0 with date of 2023: https://portal.3gpp.org/desktopmodules/Specifications/SpecificationDetails.aspx?specificationId=3144 Original: [TS23501] 3GPP, "System architecture for the 5G System (5GS)", 3GPP TS 23.501, 2019. Perhaps: [TS23.501] 3GPP, "System architecture for the 5G System (5GS)", 3GPP TS 23.501, 2023. b) Latest version is 18.0.0 with date of 2024: https://portal.3gpp.org/desktopmodules/Specifications/SpecificationDetails.aspx?specificationId=3273 Original: [TS28530] 3GPP, "Management and orchestration; Concepts, use cases and requirements", 3GPP TS 28.530, 2019. Perhaps: [TS28.530] 3GPP, "Management and orchestration; Concepts, use cases and requirements", 3GPP TS 28.530, 2024. --> 19) <!-- [rfced] The URL below does not go directly to PCI DSS, though readers can use the search feature to find it. Would it be helpful to include the following link instead? Also, we see that the latest version of PCI DSS is dated March 2022. Would you like to update the date accordingly? Original: [PCI] PCI Security Standards Council, "PCI DSS", May 2018, <https://www.pcisecuritystandards.org>. Perhaps: [PCI] PCI Security Standards Council, "PCI DSS", March 2022, <https://www.pcisecuritystandards.org/document_library/>. --> 20) <!-- [rfced] We see that the O-RAN Slicing Architecture has a newer version than the one listed in the following reference entry. Would you like to cite the more recent version (version 11.0 with date of October 2023)? Also, we're having trouble determining what title is correct here. Would the following be better, or do you prefer the current? Current: [ORAN] O-RAN, "O-RAN Working Group 1 Slicing Architecture", O-RAN.WG1 v06.00, 2022, <https://orandownloadsweb.azurewebsites.net/ specifications>. Perhaps: [ORAN] O-RAN, "O-RAN Work Group 1 (Use Cases and Overall Architecture): Slicing Architecture", O-RAN.WG1.Slicing-Architecture-R003-v11.00, October 2023, <https://orandownloadsweb.azurewebsites.net/ specifications>. --> 21) <!-- [rfced] Would it be helpful to add a colon after "constructs" and move the open parentheses to appear before "represented"? Original: To achieve this, the customer may request an IETF Network Slice Service comprising two P2P connectivity constructs (CE1-CE2 and CE2-CE3 represented as *** in the figure). ... This service contains two P2P connectivity constructs (CE1-ACE1 and ACE1-CE3 represented as ooo in the figure). ... In this case, the IETF Network Slice Service request contains two P2P connectivity constructs (CE1-ServiceFunction and ServiceFunction-CE3 represented as xxx in the figure). Perhaps: To achieve this, the customer may request an IETF Network Slice Service comprising two P2P connectivity constructs: CE1-CE2 and CE2-CE3 (represented with "*" in Figure 6). ... This service contains two P2P connectivity constructs: CE1-ACE1 and ACE1-CE3 (represented with "o" in Figure 6). ... In this case, the IETF Network Slice Service request contains two P2P connectivity constructs: CE1-ServiceFunction and ServiceFunction-CE3 (represented with "x" in Figure 6). --> 22) <!-- [rfced] Please review the quotation marks with "stacking" here. Are the quotation marks necessary? Original: This "stacking" of IETF Network Slice constructs is not different to the way virtual networks may be arranged. --> 23) <!-- [rfced] In the Contributors section, we updated <artwork> to <contact>. The parenthetical with Eric Gray's entry looks odd in the txt output because it appears closer to Jari's name than to Eric's name. The html and pdf outputs look better. To avoid any possible confusion, we suggest moving the parenthetical to the introductory text as follows. Please review and let us know your thoughts. Current: The following authors contributed significantly to this document: Eric Gray Retired (The original editor of the foundation documents) Jari Arkko Ericsson Email: jari.arkko@piuha.net Perhaps: The following people contributed substantially to the content of this document and should be considered coauthors. Eric Gray was the original editor of the foundation documents. Eric Gray Retired Jari Arkko Ericsson Email: jari.arkko@piuha.net --> 24) <!-- [rfced] Terminology a) Throughout the text, the following terminology appears to be used inconsistently. Please review these occurrences and let us know if/how they may be made consistent. IETF network slicing vs. IETF Network Slicing network controller vs. Network Controller orchestrator vs. Orchestrator "Mapping Functions" vs. mapping functions "stitched together" vs. stitched together b) Please review "hub and spoke" and "hub-and-spoke" in the following. May we update these to "hub-and-spoke topology"? Other options include "hub-and-spoke configuration" (one instance in document) and "hub-and-spoke architecture" (one instance in document). Original: A.3. Hub and Spoke ... Hub and spoke is a popular way to realize any-to-any connectivity in support of multiple P2P traffic flows ... ... In many cases, it is the network operator's choice whether to use hub and spoke to realize a mesh of P2P connectivity constructs or P2MP connectivity constructs: ... Figure 7: Example Hub and Spoke Under Customer Control ... With a P2MP or A2A connectivity construct, it is the operator's choice whether to realize the construct with ingress replication, multicast in the core, P2MP tunnels, or hub-and-spoke. Perhaps: A.3. Hub-and-Spoke Topology ... A hub-and-spoke topology is a popular way to realize any-to-any connectivity in support of multiple P2P traffic flows ... ... In many cases, it is the network operator's choice whether to use a hub-and-spoke topology to realize a mesh of P2P connectivity constructs or P2MP connectivity constructs: ... Figure 7: Example Hub-and-Spoke Topology under Customer Control ... With a P2MP or A2A connectivity construct, it is the operator's choice whether to realize the construct with ingress replication, multicast in the core, P2MP tunnels, or a hub-and-spoke topology. c) FYI - We capitalized a few instances of "IETF network slice" based on the definition in the abstract. d) FYI - We added expansions for the following abbreviations. Please review and let us know if there are any objections. eMBB - enhanced Mobile Broadband gNMI - gRPC Network Management Interface mMTC - massive Machine Type Communications MAC - Media Access Control MACsec - Media Access Control Security URLLC - Ultra-Reliable and Low Latency Communications OAM - Operations, Administration, and Maintenance --> 25) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online Style Guide <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> and let us know if any changes are needed. Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should still be reviewed as a best practice. --> Thank you. RFC Editor/st/rv On Feb 14, 2024, at 6:58 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote: *****IMPORTANT***** Updated 2024/02/14 RFC Author(s): -------------- Instructions for Completing AUTH48 Your document has now entered AUTH48. Once it has been reviewed and approved by you and all coauthors, it will be published as an RFC. 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Thank you for your cooperation, RFC Editor -------------------------------------- RFC9543 (draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slices-25) Title : A Framework for Network Slices in Networks Built from IETF Technologies Author(s) : A. Farrel, Ed., J. Drake, Ed., R. Rokui, S. Homma, K. Makhijani, L. Contreras, J. Tantsura WG Chair(s) : Oscar Gonzalez de Dios, Vishnu Pavan Beeram, Lou Berger Area Director(s) : Alvaro Retana, John Scudder, Andrew Alston
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