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Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9296 <draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-12> for your review

"Independent Submissions Editor (Eliot Lear)" <rfc-ise@rfc-editor.org> Wed, 17 August 2022 06:47 UTC

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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9296 <draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-12> for your review
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Hi Karen,

I just have one question.

In Section 3.1, 2nd para, beginning of the first (only) sentence:

> In ifStackTable, the higher layer

This "sounds" wrong to me.

We do tend to refer SNMP tables with definite articles.  It is true that 
it is a proper noun, in that it is not in the dictionary, but how do we 
address this in the context of technical documentation?

Eliot

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