[AVTCORE] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-media-rtp-session-12: (with COMMENT)

["Barry Leiba" <[e-mail]>]

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draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-media-rtp-session-12: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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A small editorial suggestion, which you can take or not as you please --
no need to respond:

-- Section 5.1 --

   The above sentence is changed to:

This, by itself, could be confusing, because there's a whole paragraph
"above".  I think it makes sense to do this, to be absolutely clear:

NEW
   The sentence containing "SHALL NOT" in the above paragraph
   is changed to:
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