Re: [AVTCORE] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-media-rtp-session-12: (with COMMENT)

[Magnus Westerlund <[e-mail]>]

Thanks Barry,

A good editorial suggestion, we should definitely incorporate this into 
the version going for approval.

Ben, can you do this as an RFC-editor note as it looks like we are green 
across the board?

Cheers

Magnus

Den 2015-12-16 kl. 00:41, skrev Barry Leiba:
> Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-media-rtp-session-12: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> A small editorial suggestion, which you can take or not as you please --
> no need to respond:
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> -- Section 5.1 --
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>     The above sentence is changed to:
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> This, by itself, could be confusing, because there's a whole paragraph
> "above".  I think it makes sense to do this, to be absolutely clear:
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> NEW
>     The sentence containing "SHALL NOT" in the above paragraph
>     is changed to:
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Magnus Westerlund

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