Re: [AVTCORE] Éric Vyncke's Discuss on draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip-08: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

[Bernard Aboba <[e-mail]>]

Eric said:

"Indeed, all IETF stream documents require that the IETF community was able
to

review it. The nature of SCIP standard has prevented such review, therefore, it
is not possible for an IETF stream document to make those claims (that are

probably correct)."

[BA] As has been the case with other RTP payload specifications (e.g. EVC
RTP Payload), arrangements were made to provide the SCIP specification to
the IETF community.  I as well as other WG participants made requests for
the SCIP specification and were provided with it.

Was an IESG member who requested the SCIP specification denied access?  If
so, this is probably more of an oversight than an intentional denial.



On Fri, Feb 2, 2024 at 5:34 AM Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <[e-mail]>
wrote:

> Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip-08: Discuss
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> DISCUSS:
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> # Éric Vyncke, INT AD, comments for draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip-05
>
> Thank you for the work put into this document. Alas, even after some email
> discussions with the authors, the core of my discuss is still there. So, I
> cannot clear my discuss.
>
> Previous DISCUSS is at:
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/xFC3Ux9AfYt3e5T0GSzrasQe_j4/
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> # DISCUSS
>
> As noted in https://www.ietf.org/blog/handling-iesg-ballot-positions/, a
> DISCUSS ballot is a request to have a discussion on the following topics:
>
> ## Section 3 and abstract
>
> I am afraid that without free and public access to the IETF community
> (whether
> informational or normative) to the SCIP protocol itself, the IETF stream
> cannot
> publish any document (even informational or experimental) with the
> following
> assertions/claims:
>
> - `SCIP is an application layer protocol that provides ... security
> services
> such as confidentiality and integrity protection` - `The SCIP protocol
> defined
> in SCIP-210 [SCIP210] includes ... security services such as end-to-end
> confidentiality and integrity protection.`
>
> Indeed, all IETF stream documents require that the IETF community was able
> to
> review it. The nature of SCIP standard has prevented such review,
> therefore, it
> is not possible for an IETF stream document to make those claims (that are
> probably correct).
>
> Suggest removing any such claim from the text or rephrasing them so that
> they
> do not appear as an IETF claim, e.g., "NATO claims that..." or "NATO
> certifies
> that ..."
>
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> COMMENT:
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>
> # COMMENTS
>
> ## Abstract
>
> Is there a reason why is SDP expanded and not RTP ?
>
> ## Section 1
>
> Unsure whether the following text has a place into an IETF RFC `This
> document
> provides a reference for network security policymakers, network equipment
> OEMs,
> procurement personnel, and government agency and commercial industry
> representatives.`. Suggest to remove it.
>
> I wonder to wonder whether the USA has left NATO ? The text `SCIP is
> presently
> implemented in United States and NATO` seems to indicate that the USA are
> not
> included in NATO.
>
> ## Section 1.2
>
> The DTX acronym is expanded twice and never used. Suggest to remove it.
>
> ## Section 2
>
> Per `Secure Communication Interoperability Protocol (SCIP) allows the
> negotiation of several voice, data, and video applications`, it appears
> that
> SCIP can also be used for *data*, but this document is only about
> video/audio.
> I.e., some text should explain to the reader what happens to the data.
>
> Please explain what is a STANAG or provide an informational reference to
> STANAG
> 5068.
>
> The reader will welcome explanations about the numbers in `scip/8000 and
> scip/90000` (e.g., by a reference to section 5)
>
> ## Section 3.1
>
> Should there be informative references for MELPe, G.729D ?
>
> Is this subsection useful ? This document is about RTP payload and this
> subsection is more fit for the SCIP endpoints themselves. But, I am
> neither a
> transport nor an application expert, so, feel free to keep this subsection.
>
> # NITS
>
> The official name of the UNO member state is "United States of America"
> and not
> simply "United States".
>
>
>
>