Re: [AVTCORE] Éric Vyncke's Discuss on draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip-08: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] Éric Vyncke's Discuss on draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip-08: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Eric, Thanks for your review of the SCIP Draft RFC and your quick reply with comments. To clear up any implied responsibility for the security capabilities of SCIP devices we propose adding the following paragraph to the end of the Introduction Section. "The U.S. Government and NATO attest that SCIP devices provide end-to-end confidentiality and integrity protection of the payload. The IETF has not conducted a security review of SCIP." Regards, Dan Hanson General Dynamics Mission Systems This message and/or attachments may include information subject to GD Corporate Policies 07-103 and 07-105 and is intended to be accessed only by authorized recipients. Use, storage and transmission are governed by General Dynamics and its policies. Contractual restrictions apply to third parties. Recipients should refer to the policies or contract to determine proper handling. Unauthorized review, use, disclosure or distribution is prohibited. If you are not an intended recipient, please contact the sender and destroy all copies of the original message. From: Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <evyncke@cisco.com> Sent: Monday, February 5, 2024 7:34 AM To: Bernard Aboba <bernard.aboba@gmail.com> Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip@ietf.org; avtcore-chairs@ietf.org; avt@ietf.org; jonathan.lennox@8x8.com Subject: Re: Éric Vyncke's Discuss on draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip-08: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT) External E-mail --- CAUTION: This email originated from outside GDMS. Do not click links or open attachments unless you recognize the sender and know the content is safe. ?Bernard, Thanks for your prompt reply, let's indeed try to have this issue behind us. -éric From: Bernard Aboba <bernard.aboba@gmail.com> Date: Monday, 5 February 2024 at 13:13 To: Eric Vyncke <evyncke@cisco.com> Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip@ietf.org>, "avtcore-chairs@ietf.org" <avtcore-chairs@ietf.org>, "avt@ietf.org" <avt@ietf.org>, "jonathan.lennox@8x8.com" <jonathan.lennox@8x8.com> Subject: Re: Éric Vyncke's Discuss on draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip-08: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT) Eric -- Something along the lines you suggest seems viable. Since Sahed's DISCUSS comment relates to what is done in SCIP versus higher layers such (S)RTP and cryptex, some discussion of the SCIP negotiation will be needed. On Mon, Feb 5, 2024 at 3:40?AM Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <evyncke@cisco.com<mailto:evyncke@cisco.com>> wrote: Hello Bernard, The SCIP specification was indeed provided to the IESG, thanks for that. My remaining issue should be trivial to address, let me repeat it with other words. There are two assertions in the text about the security of SCIP: - in the abstract: -`SCIP is an application layer protocol that provides ... security services such as confidentiality and integrity protection` - in section 2, 4th paragraph: `The SCIP protocol defined in SCIP-210 [SCIP210] includes ... security services such as end-to-end confidentiality and integrity protection.` Those claims have not been verified explicitly by the IETF community, i.e., they cannot appear like that in an IETF stream document. As I suggested in my DISCUSS, restricting the claim by removing the implicit IETF support with statement like "The SCIP WG of ???" (with "???" being "NATO" or "US Department of Defense" or ... Or even a clear disclaimer at the abstract/introduction (or an IESG note) with text such as "The IETF has not conducted a security review of SCIP and therefore has not verified the claims contained in this document". Regards -éric From: Bernard Aboba <bernard.aboba@gmail.com<mailto:bernard.aboba@gmail.com>> Date: Friday, 2 February 2024 at 22:19 To: Eric Vyncke <evyncke@cisco.com<mailto:evyncke@cisco.com>> Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org<mailto:iesg@ietf.org>>, "draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip@ietf.org>" <draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip@ietf.org>>, "avtcore-chairs@ietf.org<mailto:avtcore-chairs@ietf.org>" <avtcore-chairs@ietf.org<mailto:avtcore-chairs@ietf.org>>, "avt@ietf.org<mailto:avt@ietf.org>" <avt@ietf.org<mailto:avt@ietf.org>>, "jonathan.lennox@8x8.com<mailto:jonathan.lennox@8x8.com>" <jonathan.lennox@8x8.com<mailto:jonathan.lennox@8x8.com>> Subject: Re: Éric Vyncke's Discuss on draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip-08: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT) Eric said: "Indeed, all IETF stream documents require that the IETF community was able to review it. The nature of SCIP standard has prevented such review, therefore, it is not possible for an IETF stream document to make those claims (that are probably correct)." [BA] As has been the case with other RTP payload specifications (e.g. EVC RTP Payload), arrangements were made to provide the SCIP specification to the IETF community. I as well as other WG participants made requests for the SCIP specification and were provided with it. Was an IESG member who requested the SCIP specification denied access? If so, this is probably more of an oversight than an intentional denial. On Fri, Feb 2, 2024 at 5:34?AM Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org<mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote: Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip-08: Discuss When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- DISCUSS: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- # Éric Vyncke, INT AD, comments for draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip-05 Thank you for the work put into this document. Alas, even after some email discussions with the authors, the core of my discuss is still there. So, I cannot clear my discuss. Previous DISCUSS is at: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/xFC3Ux9AfYt3e5T0GSzrasQe_j4/ # DISCUSS As noted in https://www.ietf.org/blog/handling-iesg-ballot-positions/, a DISCUSS ballot is a request to have a discussion on the following topics: ## Section 3 and abstract I am afraid that without free and public access to the IETF community (whether informational or normative) to the SCIP protocol itself, the IETF stream cannot publish any document (even informational or experimental) with the following assertions/claims: - `SCIP is an application layer protocol that provides ... security services such as confidentiality and integrity protection` - `The SCIP protocol defined in SCIP-210 [SCIP210] includes ... security services such as end-to-end confidentiality and integrity protection.` Indeed, all IETF stream documents require that the IETF community was able to review it. The nature of SCIP standard has prevented such review, therefore, it is not possible for an IETF stream document to make those claims (that are probably correct). Suggest removing any such claim from the text or rephrasing them so that they do not appear as an IETF claim, e.g., "NATO claims that..." or "NATO certifies that ..." ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- # COMMENTS ## Abstract Is there a reason why is SDP expanded and not RTP ? ## Section 1 Unsure whether the following text has a place into an IETF RFC `This document provides a reference for network security policymakers, network equipment OEMs, procurement personnel, and government agency and commercial industry representatives.`. Suggest to remove it. I wonder to wonder whether the USA has left NATO ? The text `SCIP is presently implemented in United States and NATO` seems to indicate that the USA are not included in NATO. ## Section 1.2 The DTX acronym is expanded twice and never used. Suggest to remove it. ## Section 2 Per `Secure Communication Interoperability Protocol (SCIP) allows the negotiation of several voice, data, and video applications`, it appears that SCIP can also be used for *data*, but this document is only about video/audio. I.e., some text should explain to the reader what happens to the data. Please explain what is a STANAG or provide an informational reference to STANAG 5068. The reader will welcome explanations about the numbers in `scip/8000 and scip/90000` (e.g., by a reference to section 5) ## Section 3.1 Should there be informative references for MELPe, G.729D ? Is this subsection useful ? This document is about RTP payload and this subsection is more fit for the SCIP endpoints themselves. But, I am neither a transport nor an application expert, so, feel free to keep this subsection. # NITS The official name of the UNO member state is "United States of America" and not simply "United States".
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