Re: [AVTCORE] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6679 (3586)

Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com> Wed, 10 April 2013 13:19 UTC

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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6679 (3586)
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WG,

I have submitted this Errata. I would personally recommend that this
will be put into Verified due to the common practice to code according
to examples rather than the normative ABNF.

I hope people can provide any input on this within the next 2 weeks.

Cheers

Magnus
(As Individual)

On 2013-04-10 15:12, RFC Errata System wrote:
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6679,
> "Explicit Congestion Notification (ECN) for RTP over UDP".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=6679&eid=3586
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
> 
> Section: 12.1
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
>    The Offer:
> 
> ...
>       a=ecn-capable-rtp: ice rtp ect=0 mode=setread
> ...
> 
>    The Answer:
> ...
>       a=ecn-capable-rtp: ice ect=0 mode=readonly
> ...
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>    The Offer:
> 
> ...
>       a=ecn-capable-rtp: ice,rtp ect=0; mode=setread
> ...
> 
>    The Answer:
> ...
>       a=ecn-capable-rtp: ice ect=0; mode=readonly
> ...
> 
> Notes
> -----
> The examples does not match the ABNF rules for the
> a=ecn-capaable-rtp attribute. Two issues are present, first the
> init method list must be comma separated with no spaces, secondly
> any additional parameters shall be semi colon plus space
> separated. Therefore both a=ecn-capable-rtp lines have been
> corrected.
> 
> This is primarily an editorial issues but people needs to aware of
> the errors in the example.
> 
> Instructions:
> -------------
> This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
> use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
> rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG)
> can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. 
> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC6679 (draft-ietf-avtcore-ecn-for-rtp-08)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Explicit Congestion Notification (ECN) for RTP over UDP
> Publication Date    : August 2012
> Author(s)           : M. Westerlund, I. Johansson, C. Perkins, P. O'Hanlon, K. Carlberg
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance
> Area                : Real-time Applications and Infrastructure
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
> 
> 


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