Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action: draft-ietf-avtcore-monarch-06.txt

Qin,

I think the text added is unnecessary, but acceptable. The main problem is that it's in IANA considerations, but there's nothing there that the IANA can do. I have no objections if you want to move that text to some other section of the document.

Colin

On 15 Nov 2011, at 14:23, Qin Wu wrote:
> Thanks Colin for your review and quick comments.
> As for IANA section, the proposed change is based on Magnus's suggestion.
> I am okay to change back if nobody is against having no IANA action.
> 
> For section 5.3, the answer is yes. Thank for your suggestion.
> 
> Regards!
> -Qin
> ________________________________________
> 发件人: Colin Perkins [csp@csperkins.org]
> 发送时间: 2011年11月15日 13:40
> 到: Qin Wu
> Cc: avt@ietf.org
> 主题: Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action: draft-ietf-avtcore-monarch-06.txt
> 
> I have two quick comments on this version.
> 
> This new IANA Considerations text says:
> 
>   At the time of writing, the consumption of XR block code points isn't
>   a major issue.  However when XR block codes points is really close to
>   run out of space, it might be desirable to define new fields encoded
>   as TLV elements in the XR report block or define one XR block type
>   for vendor-specific extensions, with an enterprise number included to
>   identify the vendor making the extension.
> 
> This is not actionable by IANA, so I think it should be changed back to the previous wording of "There is no IANA action in this document".
> 
> Section 5.3 "proposes to define a new XR block". This would probably be better phrased as "draft-… defines a new XR block", since the definition has already happened.
> 
> Colin
> 
> 
> On 14 Nov 2011, at 10:05, Qin Wu wrote:
>> Hi, Folks:
>> We have just submitted a new version of monarch document.
>> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-avtcore-monarch-06.txt
>> 
>> We talk with chairs and think it has been ready for WGLC.
>> Chairs, would you like to use this version as baseline to raise WGLC?
>> 
>> 
>> Regards!
>> -Qin
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>> 发送时间: 2011年11月14日 8:26
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>> 主题: I-D Action: draft-ietf-avtcore-monarch-06.txt
>> 
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance Working Group of the IETF.
>> 
>>       Title           : Monitoring Architectures for RTP
>>       Author(s)       : Qin Wu
>>                         Geoff Hunt
>>                         Philip Arden
>>       Filename        : draft-ietf-avtcore-monarch-06.txt
>>       Pages           : 25
>>       Date            : 2011-11-13
>> 
>>  This memo proposes an architecture for extending RTCP with a new RTCP
>>  XR (RFC3611) block type to report new metrics regarding media
>>  transmission or reception quality, following RTCP guideline
>>  established in RFC5968.  This memo suggests that a new block should
>>  contain a single metric or a small number of metrics relevant to a
>>  single parameter of interest or concern, rather than containing a
>>  number of metrics which attempt to provide full coverage of all those
>>  parameters of concern to a specific application.  Applications may
>>  then &quot;mix and match&quot; to create a set of blocks which covers their set
>>  of concerns.  Where possible, a specific block should be designed to
>>  be re-usable across more than one application, for example, for all
>>  of voice, streaming audio and video.
>> 
>> 
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>> 
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