RE: [AVT] RE: Comments on draft-ietf-avt-mime-h224-02.txt

"Even, Roni" <roni.even@polycom.co.il> Tue, 28 June 2005 05:53 UTC

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Subject: RE: [AVT] RE: Comments on draft-ietf-avt-mime-h224-02.txt
Date: Tue, 28 Jun 2005 08:54:01 +0300
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Hi,
I used XML2RFC 1.29
Roni 

-----Original Message-----
From: Tom Taylor [mailto:taylor@nortel.com] 
Sent: Monday, June 27, 2005 9:28 PM
To: Even, Roni
Cc: Magnus Westerlund; IETF AVT WG; mrose@dbc.mtview.ca.us
Subject: Re: [AVT] RE: Comments on draft-ietf-avt-mime-h224-02.txt

I produce XML2RFC documents with the web tool on a PC, and normally
check them afterward with a hex editor to make sure line and page ends
are set up correctly.  I failed to do so with 2833bis-09 because XML2RFC
release notes said they had fixed the tool to provide for Windows
line-end conventions.  I see now I was mistaken: the document begins as
usual in the past with a series of LF (x'0a') rather than CR-LF
(x'0d0a') as required by IETF formatting conventions.  Similarly the end
of page is marked by LF-FF-LF (x'0a0c0a'), an improvement in ordering
over previous versions, but lacking the CRs.

When I look at draft-ietf-avt-mime-h224-02.txt, I'm surprised to see no
form feed characters at all!  There's just a pair of LF characters at
the end of the page.

I'm copying Marshall Rose on this note.  The problem may be intractable,
but the ideal output of the tool (according to RFC 2234) would be:

CR-LF for line ends
CR-LF-FF-CR-LF between pages

Even, Roni wrote:
> Magnus,
> Thanks for going over the document.
> In line
> Roni
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Magnus Westerlund [mailto:magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com]
> Sent: Monday, June 27, 2005 3:43 PM
> To: Even, Roni; IETF AVT WG
> Subject: Comments on draft-ietf-avt-mime-h224-02.txt
> 
> Hi Roni,
> 
> I have some comments on the draft:
> 
> 1. First, it is quite irritating that the draft lacks the correct page

> break markers.
> 
> Roni: I am using xmk2rfc so it is a bit strange, can you show me an 
> example.
> 
...


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