Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action:draft-ietf-avtcore-feedback-supression-rtp-07.txt
Qin Wu <bill.wu@huawei.com> Tue, 11 October 2011 12:06 UTC
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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action:draft-ietf-avtcore-feedback-supression-rtp-07.txt
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Hi, Albrecht: Thank for your comment, I agree with your clarification and will be careful with terms using in the draft. Regards! -Qin ----- Original Message ----- From: "Schwarz, Albrecht (Albrecht)" <albrecht.schwarz@alcatel-lucent.com> To: "Qin Wu" <bill.wu@huawei.com>; "Colin Perkins" <csp@csperkins.org>; <avt@ietf.org> Sent: Tuesday, October 11, 2011 5:51 PM Subject: RE: [AVTCORE] I-D Action:draft-ietf-avtcore-feedback-supression-rtp-07.txt Hi, the notion of a "middlebox" is frequently used for justifying sth in the discussion below, but a reference to such a device is not really provided. There seems to be two possible interpretations: "Middlebox" a) = MIDCOM-compliant middlebox (and then a reference to definition § 2.2/RFC 3303 could be added) b) = a network intermediate device that implements unknown services on top of IP packet forwarding (i.e., a block box with unknown behaviour). I suppose that interpretation (b) is supposed here, - and thus slightly concerned that such a definition may be used to justify "any kind of requirement":-) Regards, Albrecht PS Similar is "repair server", but such a device is not mentioned in the draft. > -----Original Message----- > From: avt-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:avt-bounces@ietf.org] On > Behalf Of Qin Wu > Sent: Dienstag, 11. Oktober 2011 10:11 > To: Colin Perkins; avt@ietf.org > Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] I-D > Action:draft-ietf-avtcore-feedback-supression-rtp-07.txt > > Hi, Colin: > Thank for your careful review, please see my replies belows. > > Regards! > -Qin > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Colin Perkins" <csp@csperkins.org> > To: <avt@ietf.org> > Sent: Tuesday, October 11, 2011 5:46 AM > Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] I-D > Action:draft-ietf-avtcore-feedback-supression-rtp-07.txt > > > > On 26 Sep 2011, at 09:17, Internet-Drafts@ietf.org wrote: > >> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line > Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the > Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance Working Group of the IETF. > >> > >> Title : RTCP Extension for Third-party Loss Report > >> Author(s) : Qin Wu > >> Frank Xia > >> Roni Even > >> Filename : draft-ietf-avtcore-feedback-supression-rtp-07.txt > >> Pages : 16 > >> Date : 2011-09-26 > >> > >> In a large RTP session using the RTCP feedback mechanism > defined in > >> RFC 4585, a feedback target may experience transient > overload if some > >> event causes a large number of receivers to send > feedback at once. > >> This overload is usually avoided by ensuring that > feedback reports > >> are forwarded to all receivers, allowing them to avoid sending > >> duplicate feedback reports. However, there are cases > where it is not > >> recommended to forward feedback reports, and this may > allow feedback > >> implosion. This memo discusses these cases and defines > a new RTCP > >> third-party loss report that can be used to inform > receivers that the > >> network is aware of some loss event, allowing them to suppress > >> feedback. Associated SDP signalling is also defined. > >> > >> > >> A URL for this Internet-Draft is: > >> > http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-avtcore-feedbac > k-supression-rtp-07.txt > > > > > > I have read this draft, and have some comments: > > > > - Section 1, 1st paragraph: "(e.g, implementing the RFC > 4585" - should this be "(e.g., not implementing the RFC 4585"? > > [Qin]:It is a typo and my mistake. Thank for catching it. > > > > - Section 3, 3rd paragraph, says the "timer value shall be > based on the observed round-trip time", but it's not clear > that this means. By based on, do you mean equal to the RTT, > or some other function derived from it? Which RTT? The > suppression, ideally, wants to be for long enough for the > sender of the TPLR to somehow repair the loss at all of its > downstream receivers, so none of them need to resend a NACK. > This might imply the RTT from the receiver to the original > media source and/or repair server be used, which is different > from the RTT specified. I think some more thought is needed here. > > > > [Qin]: See my discussion with Magnus in the previous email on > this thread. But that need some corrections. I think you are > right, If the middlbox is repair server, more approximate RTT > is the RTT from the receiver and repair server. If the > original media is repair server, more approximate RTT should > be 1/2 of RTT between the middlebox and receiver plus RTT > from middlebox to media source. But if the middlebox sending > TPLR is more close to media source, one RTT from middlebox to > media source can be omitted. > > > - Section 3, 4th paragraph: "In the case the first TPLR is > lost and the additional TPLR arrives at the receiver, the > receiver should immediately refresh the timer" - sure, but > what else would it do? This makes it seem that something > different is done in this case, but the behaviour looks to be > the same whether or not a TPLR is lost. > > [Qin]: Assume the middlebox sending NACK upstream and TPLR > downstream at the same time,refresh timer means waiting for > one RTT from media source to get the retransmitted RTP data > packet after getting that additional TPLR, however if the > middlebox itself is repair server, the timer should be same > irrespectively a TPLR is lost, i.e., 1/2 RTT from middlebox > to the receiver. > > > > - Section 6.3: if a monitor co-located with a translator > detects a loss, why does that monitor not send a NACK? Not > clear what's the reason for using a TPLR here. > > [Qin]:That's becos translator has a monitor, which told > translator to send TPLR, if translator has no monitor and > receives NACK from a receiver, this receiver should forward > NACK directly. Does this clarify? > > > - Section 6.5: the behaviour described makes sense for an > RTP-terminating mixer, but an RFC 3550 mixer could just > forward the FIR or PLI messages without using the TPLR, no? > > [Qin]: According to Section 7.3 of RFC 3550, a mixer must not > forward RTCP unaltered between > the two domains, also according to section 3.4 of RFC5117, > In some cases, the reception > of a codec-control message may result in the generation and > transmission of RTCP feedback messages by the Mixer to the > participants in the other domain. > So I think this is not a issue. > > > > > > > I also have a number of more minor, mostly editorial, suggestions: > > > > - Abstract: change "that the network is aware" to "that the > feedback target is aware" > > [Qin]: Okay, fixed. > > > - Section 1, 1st paragraph: "as a packet loss recovery > technique based, sending" -> "as a packet loss recovery > technique, sending" > > [Qin]: Okay, fixed. > > > > > - Section 1, 4th paragraph: "while the case the" -> "while > the case where the" > > [Qin]: Okay, fixed. > > > > - Section 1, 4th paragraph: last sentence is repeated > > [Qin]: Okay, fixed. > > > > - Section 3, 2nd paragraph: "generated by a RTP system" -> > "generated by an RTP system" > > [Qin]: Okay, fixed. > > > > - Section 3, 2nd paragraph: "as per AVPF" -> "as per the > RTP/AVPF rules" > > [Qin]: Okay, fixed. > > > > - Section 3, 2nd paragraph: "SHOULD NOT initiate their own > additional" -> "SHOULD NOT send their own additional" > > [Qin]: Okay, fixed. > > > > - Section 3, 4th paragraph: what is meant by "a > transmission packet"? Do you mean an RTP data packet, or some > other RTCP packet? > > [Qin]: RTP data packet. I will fix this by adding some > explanation text. > > > > > - Section 3, 4th paragraph: not sure what is meant by "a > receiver is allowed to receive additional TPLR" - when would > it not be allowed to receive? Would this be better saying > that the sending an generate an additional TPLR? > > [Qin]: Okay, fixed. > > > > - Section 3, 5th paragraph: "may still have sent" -> "may have sent" > > [Qin]: Okay, fixed. > > > > - Section 3, 5th paragraph: "will be suppressed by this > technique for a certain period of time" -> "SHOULD be > suppressed for a period of time after receiving the TPLR"? > > [Qin]: Okay, fixed. > > > > - Section 3, 6th paragraph: what is meant by "closer to the > source" in this paragraph? > > [Qin]: means the location of middlebox is more closer to the > media source. > I will fix this by adding some explanation text. > > > > > - Section 4.1: "bitmask of proceeding lost packets" -> > "bitmask of lost packets" > > [Qin]: Okay, fixed. > > > > > > > > -- > > Colin Perkins > > http://csperkins.org/ > > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance > > avt@ietf.org > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/avt > _______________________________________________ > Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance > avt@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/avt > =
- [AVTCORE] I-D Action: draft-ietf-avtcore-feedback… internet-drafts
- Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action: draft-ietf-avtcore-feed… Colin Perkins
- Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action:draft-ietf-avtcore-feedb… Qin Wu
- Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action:draft-ietf-avtcore-feedb… Schwarz, Albrecht (Albrecht)
- Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action:draft-ietf-avtcore-feedb… Qin Wu
- Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action:draft-ietf-avtcore-feedb… Schwarz, Albrecht (Albrecht)
- Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action:draft-ietf-avtcore-feedb… Colin Perkins
- Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action:draft-ietf-avtcore-feedb… Qin Wu