[AVTCORE] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: (with COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 01 October 2019 08:15 UTC

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Subject: [AVTCORE] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: (with COMMENT)
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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thank you for the work put into this document. It is far from my area of
expertise, so, I have reviewed only parts of it and my comments below may be
non relevant.

Regards,

-éric

== COMMENTS ==

-- Section 2.3 --
C.1) "The assignment of an RTP payload type for this new packet format is
outside the scope of this document and will not be specified here", possibly
outside of my expertise area, but, why not requesting a payload type in this
document? And I see no other documents related to TSVCIS in the AVTCORE WG that
could do it. It also appears to contradict sections 4 and 7.

-- Section 3.1 --
C.2) Probably worth explaining why CODC is sometime "not available" ? Is this
not always present as hinted in the text below? If so, then what about using
"not present" ?

== NITS ==

-- Section 3 --
N.1) in "the timestamp is, as always, that", could perhaps replace "as always"
by "as specified in XYZ"