Re: [babel] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-babel-rtt-extension-06: (with COMMENT)

Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr> Sun, 21 April 2024 18:09 UTC

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From: Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr>
To: Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zahed.sarker.ietf@gmail.com>
Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-babel-rtt-extension@ietf.org, babel-chairs@ietf.org, babel@ietf.org, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [babel] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-babel-rtt-extension-06: (with COMMENT)
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> Comment:
>   - I think this sentence is unnecessary and suggest to remove it, it says -
> 
>         this is the case in most networks known to the authors, but might not
>         necessarily be the case in networks built over exotic link technologies.

As a compromise, I've removed half of the clause.

> s/application /Application , in Section 1.1  title.

Done, thanks.