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Re: [babel] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-babel-source-specific(2018-03-26 to 2018-04-09)

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Subject: Re: [babel] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-babel-source-specific(2018-03-26 to 2018-04-09)
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After a quick reading, IMO this draft is ready.







A small nit:

In the second paragraph, section 5.1:

"When a node receives a source-specific ...  from a neighbour neigh, it behaves as described ..."


It seems like "neighbour" and "neigh" are duplicate.







Thanks,


Sandy



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发件人：DonaldEastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
收件人：Babel at IETF <babel@ietf.org>
抄送人：babel-chairs@ietf.org <babel-chairs@ietf.org>
日 期 ：2018年03月27日 02:17
主 题 ：[babel] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-babel-source-specific(2018-03-26 to 2018-04-09)


Hi,

This message starts a two-week WG Last Call on
draft-ietf-babel-source-specific-03.txt. Please review the draft and
indicate whether you think it is ready for advancement. Comments
welcome.

Thanks,
Donald
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