Re: [bess] RtgDir Last Call review: draft-ietf-bess-srv6-services-08

Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com> Wed, 24 November 2021 02:18 UTC

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From: Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 24 Nov 2021 07:47:41 +0530
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Subject: Re: [bess] RtgDir Last Call review: draft-ietf-bess-srv6-services-08
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Hi Sasha,

Thanks for your review and your help with improving it as part of your
previous review.

Thanks,
Ketan


On Tue, 23 Nov 2021 at 23:18, Alexander Vainshtein <
Alexander.Vainshtein@rbbn.com> wrote:

> Hello,
>
> I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft.
> The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related
> drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes
> on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to
> the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please
> see ​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir
> <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir>
>
> Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it
> would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last
> Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through
> discussion or by updating the draft.
>
> Document:  draft-ietf-bess-srv6-services-08
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-bess-srv6-services>
> Reviewer: Alexander (“Sasha”) Vainshtein
> Review Date: 23-Nov-21
> IETF LC End Date: 24-Nov-21
> Intended Status: Standards Track
>
> *Summary: *No issues found. This document is ready for publication.
>
> *Comments*:
>
> I have reviewed the -05 version of the draft ~10 months ago. I have then
> found some minor issues with the draft that have been discussed with the
> authors and successfully resolved in the -06 and -07 versions of the draft.
> I have  therefore reviewed changes between the -07 and -08 version (mainly
> editorial) and did not find any new issues.
>
> I would like to thank (again) the authors for their responsiveness and
> cooperation.
>
>
>
> *Major Issues*:  Not found.
>
>
>
> *Minor Issues*:  Not found.
>
>
>
> Hopefully this review will be useful.
>
>
>
> Regards,
>
> Sasha
>
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