[bess] RtgDir Last Call review: draft-ietf-bess-srv6-services-08

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Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see ​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir<http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir>

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document:  draft-ietf-bess-srv6-services-08<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-bess-srv6-services>
Reviewer: Alexander (“Sasha”) Vainshtein
Review Date: 23-Nov-21
IETF LC End Date: 24-Nov-21
Intended Status: Standards Track

Summary: No issues found. This document is ready for publication.
Comments:
I have reviewed the -05 version of the draft ~10 months ago. I have then found some minor issues with the draft that have been discussed with the authors and successfully resolved in the -06 and -07 versions of the draft. I have  therefore reviewed changes between the -07 and -08 version (mainly editorial) and did not find any new issues.
I would like to thank (again) the authors for their responsiveness and cooperation.

Major Issues:  Not found.

Minor Issues:  Not found.

Hopefully this review will be useful.

Regards,
Sasha

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