[bess] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-11: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 10 August 2023 06:40 UTC

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Subject: [bess] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-11: (with COMMENT)
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Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-11: No Objection

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Section 2 defines "BD" but it's not used anywhere in this document.  Nor are
"NDF", "BDF", "vES", "ISID", or "MAC-VRF".

The sole "SHOULD" in Section 4.1 leaves me with two questions: (1) What happens
if I don't do this?  (2) The sentence itself appears to parse like "You SHOULD
do this, but you don't actually have to" which seems like an abuse of BCP 14. 
I think this is better if you just change "SHOULD" to "should", and drop the
BCP 14 references altogether.