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Re: [bess] shepherd review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-etree

Thomas Morin <thomas.morin@orange.com> Mon, 29 August 2016 15:21 UTC

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My previous email was missing comments on the References section...

> 9  References
>
> 9.1 Normative References
>
>     [KEYWORDS] Bradner, S., "Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate
>                Requirement Levels", BCP 14, RFC 2119, March 1997.
>
>     [RFC7432] Sajassi et al., "BGP MPLS Based Ethernet VPN", February,
>                2015.
>
>     [RFC7623] Sajassi et al., "Provider Backbone Bridging Combined with
>                Ethernet VPN (PBB-EVPN)", September, 2015.

RFC7385 will have to be added to the list.

>
> 9.2 Informative References
>
>     [RFC7387] Key et al., "A Framework for E-Tree Service over MPLS
>     Network", October 2014.
>   
>
>
>     [RFC7153] Rosen et al., "IANA Registries for BGP Extended
>     Communities",  March, 2014.

This should be I think under Normative References.

>
>     [RFC6514] Aggarwal et al., "BGP Encodings and Procedures for
>     Multicast in MPLS/BGP IP VPNs",  February, 2012.

Ditto.

-Thomas

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