[bess] Genart early review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-multicast-controller-11

Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 07 November 2023 01:31 UTC

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Subject: [bess] Genart early review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-multicast-controller-11

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-bess-bgp-multicast-controller-11

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2023-11-06
IETF LC End Date: 2023-11-10
IESG Telechat date: NA

Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Standard RFC, no other
comments than those on the list.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

-[Page 21], Section 4.2, "recevied on"-->"received on" (twice)

-[Page 21], Section 4.3, "an Extented"-->"an Extended"

[bess] Genart early review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp… Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker
Re: [bess] Genart early review of draft-ietf-bess… Jeffrey (Zhaohui) Zhang