[bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-overlay-10
Vijay Gurbani <vkg@acm.org> Thu, 21 December 2017 14:16 UTC
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Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-overlay-?? Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani Review Date: 2017-12-21 IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-22 IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-11 Summary: The draft is ready as a PS. It has one Minor issue that needs some discussion. Major issues: None. Minor issues: One. Nits/editorial comments: None. Minor issues: In S13 (IANA Considerations), I am not sure whether this draft is allocating the tunnel types or not. The responsible IANA registry [0] shows that the tunnel types mentioned in this draft are already allocated through a precursor individual draft [1], which has long expired. However, when I look at the IANA Consideration section in [1], it is empty! So I am not sure how the IANA registry in [0] received the allocations. I think the IANA section of this draft needs to be updated accordingly. [0] https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-parameters/bgp-parameters.xhtml#tunnel-types [1] http://www.iana.org/go/draft-sd-l2vpn-evpn-overlay (the expired individual draft itself is at https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-sd-l2vpn-evpn-overlay-03)
- [bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess… Vijay Gurbani
- Re: [bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Alvaro Retana
- Re: [bess] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of d… Alissa Cooper
- Re: [bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Ali Sajassi (sajassi)