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Hi,

>I have reviewed the pull requests. All the changes look good to me. Just a few things I suggest updating,
>    
> Line 184/5, I do not understand the point this sentence is making and think it can be removed, "As a result, each 
> endpoint will take the same role for each BFCP-controlled media stream associated with the BFCP stream."

In RFC 4583 is was allowed (eventhough the procedures were underspecified) for endpoint to have different roles for different media streams. We agreed to change that in 4583bis, and the statement above reflects that decision. Since it is a change from 4583, I think it is useful to have it.
    
> Line 551, s/corresponding offer.; and/corresponding offer; and

Will fix.
    
> Line 586, s/an answer, that contains/an answer that contains

Will fix.
    
> Lines 710/11, I disputed the accuracy of this statement in another thread, "nor do they reveal which media streams will be 
> BFCP controlled." I think this last statement should be removed.

I suggested new text in a separate reply.

Regards,

Christer

    
    
    -----Original Message-----
    From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
    Date: Tuesday, December 4, 2018 at 12:57 AM
    To: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>, Charles Eckel <eckelcu@cisco.com>, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>, Eric Rescorla <ekr@rtfm.com>, "resnick@episteme.net" <resnick@episteme.net>
    Cc: "bfcpbis@ietf.org" <bfcpbis@ietf.org>, Mary Barnes <mary.ietf.barnes@gmail.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis@ietf.org>, "bfcpbis-chairs@ietf.org" <bfcpbis-chairs@ietf.org>
    Subject: Re: [bfcpbis] IESG AD reviews of draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-26: The Pull Request
    
        Correct e-mail address for Pete.
        
        On 03/12/2018, 17.51, "Christer Holmberg" <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:
        
            Hi,
            
            The fourth commit includes additional changes based on Benjamin's and Ekr's reviews, and changes based on Pete's gen-art review.
            
            https://github.com/cdh4u/draft-bfcp-4583bis/pull/13
            
            At this point I do NOT intend to make further changes based on the IESG review, so please take a look and let me know whether I have forgotten something, or whether I did something wrong.
            
            Regards,
            
            Christer
            
            Ps. Ekr, I got rid of most of the "associated" terminology from the O/A section. There is still some, but the text now talks about "including attributes in m sections", similar to BUNDLE.
            
            
            
            
            On 03/12/2018, 9.53, "bfcpbis on behalf of Christer Holmberg" <bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:
            
                Hi,
                
                The third commit includes changes based on Benjamin's and Ekr's reviews.
                
                Regards,
                
                Christer
                
                On 02/12/2018, 13.34, "bfcpbis on behalf of Christer Holmberg" <bfcpbis-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:
                
                    Hi,
                    
                    The second commit includes changes (all but the one related to the MUX category) based on Ben's review.
                    
                    Regards,
                    
                    Christer
                    
                    
                    
                    On 02/12/2018, 13.32, "Christer Holmberg" <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:
                    
                        Hi,
                        
                        I have created a pull request that will include the changes based on the AD reviews.
                        
                        The first commit includes changes based on Alexey's review.
                        
                        https://github.com/cdh4u/draft-bfcp-4583bis/pull/13
                        
                        Regards,
                        
                        Christer
                        
                         
                        
                        
                    
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