Re: [Bier] RtgDir Last Call review: draft-ietf-bier-bfd-03

Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> Fri, 28 July 2023 16:36 UTC

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From: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 28 Jul 2023 09:35:28 -0700
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Subject: Re: [Bier] RtgDir Last Call review: draft-ietf-bier-bfd-03
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Hi Russ,
thank you for the review and your kind words; much appreciated.

Regards,
Greg (on behalf of the authors)

On Fri, Jul 28, 2023 at 8:32 AM opens@riw.us <opens@riw.us> wrote:

> Hello,
>
> I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft.
> The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related
> drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and
> sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide
> assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing
> Directorate, please see https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/rtg/RtgDir
>
> Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it
> would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF
> Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through
> discussion or by updating the draft.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-bier-bfd-03
> Reviewer: Russ White
> Review Date: 28 July 2023
> IETF LC End Date: 11 August 2023
> Intended Status: Standards Track
>
> Summary:
>
> No issues found. This document is ready for publication.
>
> Comments:
>
> This draft is readable, short, and has good figures to illustrate the
> TLVs being created. i appreciate the pointers to security considerations
> in other drafts, rather than the normal "no new issues raised"--this was
> helpful.
>
> Major Issues:
>
> No major issues found.
>
> Minor Issues:
>
> No minor issues found.
>
>
>