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Subject: [Bier] RtgDir Last Call review: draft-ietf-bier-bfd-03
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Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. 
The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related 
drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and 
sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide 
assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing 
Directorate, please see https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/rtg/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it 
would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF 
Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through 
discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-bier-bfd-03
Reviewer: Russ White
Review Date: 28 July 2023
IETF LC End Date: 11 August 2023
Intended Status: Standards Track

Summary:

No issues found. This document is ready for publication.

Comments:

This draft is readable, short, and has good figures to illustrate the 
TLVs being created. i appreciate the pointers to security considerations 
in other drafts, rather than the normal "no new issues raised"--this was 
helpful.

Major Issues:

No major issues found.

Minor Issues:

No minor issues found.

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