[Bier] Comments on draft-chh-bier-bier-yang-00

"Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" <rrahman@cisco.com> Thu, 23 July 2015 11:43 UTC

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From: "Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" <rrahman@cisco.com>
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Subject: [Bier] Comments on draft-chh-bier-bier-yang-00
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Hi authors,

  *   I tried to pyang the model in the draft and ran into quite a few errors. I stopped after the 4 below (these are basic YANG errors, wasn’t even using strict/ietf option)
  *   Once you fix these errors please compile with —ietf option (sricter rules regarding ordering of statements, requiring description etc etc)
  *   Please follow RFC6087 guidelines e.g. use of <CODE BEGINS>, <CODE ENDS> etc
  *   Finally, please use the validator @ http://www.yangvalidator.com/

Regards,
Reshad.

ERRORS

No “” for the contact
ietf-bier.yang:34: error: unterminated statement definition for keyword "contact", looking at L

Extra “ in "reference "draft-chen-bier-bier-yang-00”;
59: error: unterminated statement definition for keyword "reference", looking at d

Missing ; in key "sub-domain-id"
125: error: unterminated statement definition for keyword "key", looking at l

Missing ; in type if:interface-ref
154: error: unterminated statement definition for keyword "type", looking at }