Re: [bmwg] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5695 (1970)

Carlos Pignataro <cpignata@cisco.com> Mon, 21 December 2009 15:32 UTC

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Date: Mon, 21 Dec 2009 10:31:49 -0500
From: Carlos Pignataro <cpignata@cisco.com>
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Subject: Re: [bmwg] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5695 (1970)
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Thank you for this errata report, Alfred !

I think this is a valid editorial and should be verified, but I suggest
a slightly different correction:

 |  It is RECOMMENDED that all of the ports (A1, DA1, DB1, B1, etc) on
                                                           ^^^^^^^

This is so that it matches the second paragraph of Section 4.1.3 at
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5695#section-4.1.3>

Thanks,

-- Carlos.


On 12/21/2009 8:29 AM, RFC Errata System wrote:
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5695,
> "MPLS Forwarding Benchmarking Methodology for IP Flows".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5695&eid=1970
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <ah@TR-Sys.de>
> 
> Section: 4.1.2
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
>                                                               vv
> |  It is RECOMMENDED that all of the ports (A1, DA1, DB1, and A2) on the
>    DUT and test tool support a dynamic Interior Gateway Protocol (IGP)
>    for routing such as IS-IS, OSPF, RIP, etc.  [...]
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>                                                               vvvvvvvv
> |  It is RECOMMENDED that all of the ports (A1, DA1, DB1, and B1, etc.)
>    on the DUT and test tool support a dynamic Interior Gateway Protocol
>    (IGP) for routing such as IS-IS, OSPF, RIP, etc.  [...]
> 
> Notes
> -----
> Rationale:
>   The text (on top of page 6 of the RFC) should refer to all four
>   columns in Figure 1 (on page 4); "A2" as the name of a second entity
>   in the first coulumn seems to be redundant; therefore,  s/A2/B1/ ;
>   additionally, ", etc." suggested as an indication of the other rows.
> 
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> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC5695 (draft-ietf-bmwg-mpls-forwarding-meth-06)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : MPLS Forwarding Benchmarking Methodology for IP Flows
> Publication Date    : November 2009
> Author(s)           : A. Akhter, R. Asati, C. Pignataro
> Category            : INFORMATIONAL
> Source              : Benchmarking Methodology
> Area                : Operations and Management
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
>

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