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Re: [C310] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9031 <draft-ietf-6tisch-minimal-security-15.txt> NOW AVAILABLE

Jean Mahoney <jmahoney@amsl.com> Wed, 12 May 2021 19:37 UTC

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To: Mališa Vučinić <malisa.vucinic@inria.fr>, Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca>
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Subject: Re: [C310] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9031 <draft-ietf-6tisch-minimal-security-15.txt> NOW AVAILABLE
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Mališa,

Thanks for catching those! We have updated the document based on your 
feedback:

    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9031-lastrfcdiff.html

    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9031.txt
    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9031.pdf
    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9031.html
    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9031.xml
    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9031-diff.html
    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9031-auth48diff.html

Best regards,

RFC Editor/jm

On 5/12/21 12:21 PM, Mališa Vučinić wrote:
> Jean,
>
> Could you do the following small changes before my final approval. Right now, the table of contents shows:
> - Link-layer Configuration (note the lowercase "l" in "layer")
> - Network-Layer Configuration (note the uppercase "L" in "Layer")
> - Application-Level Configuration (note the use of "Level")
>
> I propose that we use the "*-Layer" form for all three cases.
>
> On a similar note, I propose to replace the following two occurrences of "level" with "layer" in the text:
> Section 8.3.1: "relates to the application-level handling"
> Section 8.4.2, Table 5: "Identifies the array carrying one or more link-level cryptographic keys"
>
> Thanks!
>
> Mališa
>
> On 12/05/2021 18:55, "Jean Mahoney" <jmahoney@amsl.com> wrote:
>
>      Michael,
>      
>      Thank you for your response. We have noted your approval on the AUTH48
>      status page:
>      
>          https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9031
>      
>      We'll await further word from Mališa regarding other AUTH48 changes
>      and/or approval.
>      
>      Best regards,
>      
>      RFC Editor/jm
>      
>      On 5/12/21 11:14 AM, Michael Richardson wrote:
>      > Jean Mahoney <jmahoney@amsl.com> wrote:
>      >      > Thank you for your quick response. We have updated the document with
>      >      > your feedback:
>      >
>      >      >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9031.txt
>      >      > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9031.pdf
>      >      > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9031.html
>      >      > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9031.xml
>      >      > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9031-diff.html (all changes)
>      >      > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9031-auth48diff.html (AUTH48
>      >      > changes)
>      >
>      >      > We have also updated the terms "layer-2" and "layer-3" to "Layer 2" and
>      >      > "Layer 3" to match changes in RFC 9030.
>      >
>      > I have been through the changes, and I approve of them all.
>      > Thank you.
>      >
>      >
>      >
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>      > Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@sandelman.ca>   . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting )
>      >             Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide
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