Re: [calsify] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-calext-ical-relations-09: (with COMMENT)

Michael Douglass <mikeadouglass@gmail.com> Sun, 27 February 2022 22:18 UTC

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Subject: Re: [calsify] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-calext-ical-relations-09: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks Murray.

On 2/17/22 01:03, Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker wrote:
> Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-calext-ical-relations-09: No Objection
>
> Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/blog/handling-iesg-ballot-positions/
> for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
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> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-calext-ical-relations/
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> COMMENT:
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> There's a lot of missing punctuation in here, such as the prose in Sections
> 11.2 through 11.5, the end of the second and final paragraphs of 1.4, first
> paragraph of 2, "Property Parametes" of and the latter two examples in 8.2, etc.
Fixed
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> This document needs a normative reference to ABNF (RFC 5234), and should
> mention explicitly that a lot of the ABNF tokens (e.g., "dur-value") are
> imported from RFC 5545.
Done
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