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Re: [Can] Martin Duke's Block on charter-ietf-can-00-03: (with BLOCK and COMMENT)

Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com> Tue, 14 February 2023 18:02 UTC

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From: Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 14 Feb 2023 10:02:33 -0800
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Subject: Re: [Can] Martin Duke's Block on charter-ietf-can-00-03: (with BLOCK and COMMENT)
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Looks good to me.

On Tue, Feb 14, 2023 at 10:00 AM John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net> wrote:

> Hi Martin,
>
> We’ve posted version 04 of the charter, which I believe addresses your
> BLOCK and COMMENT. It adds the sentence "The CAN WG will initially focus on
> single domain models”, changes the tense of the text about ALTO from past
> to present, and makes a few other small updates.
>
>
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fcharter-ietf-can%2Fwithmilestones-00-03.txt&url2=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fcharter-ietf-can%2Fwithmilestones-00-04.txt&difftype=--html
>
> Please LMK if that looks OK now.
>
> Thanks,
>
> —John

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