Re: [Capwap] CAPWAP IESG Review Comment E2
"Pat Calhoun (pacalhou)" <pcalhoun@cisco.com> Thu, 19 June 2008 01:30 UTC
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From: "Pat Calhoun (pacalhou)" <pcalhoun@cisco.com>
To: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com>, capwap@frascone.com
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Subject: Re: [Capwap] CAPWAP IESG Review Comment E2
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OK, closing issue 83. PatC -----Original Message----- From: Romascanu, Dan (Dan) [mailto:dromasca@avaya.com] Sent: Wednesday, June 18, 2008 5:59 AM To: Pat Calhoun (pacalhou); capwap@frascone.com Subject: RE: [Capwap] CAPWAP IESG Review Comment E2 OK with me, pending on the respective changes being having been made correctly. Dan > -----Original Message----- > From: Pat Calhoun (pacalhou) [mailto:pcalhoun@cisco.com] > Sent: Wednesday, June 18, 2008 3:56 PM > To: capwap@frascone.com > Subject: [Capwap] CAPWAP IESG Review Comment E2 > > All, > > The IESG Comment is as follows: > > E2 - A number of editorial problems have been detected when running > idnits. Please fix them: > > ------------------ > > Checking nits according to > http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt: > > -------------------------------------------------------------- > ---------- > ---- > > == No 'Intended status' indicated for this document; assuming > Proposed > Standard > > > Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html: > > -------------------------------------------------------------- > ---------- > ---- > > No issues found here. > > Miscellaneous warnings: > > -------------------------------------------------------------- > ---------- > ---- > > == Using lowercase 'not' together with uppercase 'MUST' is not an > accepted > usage according to RFC 2119. Please use 'MUST NOT' (if that is > what you > mean). > > Found 'MUST not' in this paragraph: > > Unless otherwise specified, a control message that lists a set of > supported (or expected) message elements MUST not expect the > message > elements to be in any specific order. The sender MAY include the > message > elements in any order. Unless otherwise noted, one message > element of > each type is present in a given control message. > > > Checking references for intended status: Proposed Standard > > -------------------------------------------------------------- > ---------- > ---- > > (See RFCs 3967 and 4897 for information about using normative > references > to lower-maturity documents in RFCs) > > == Missing Reference: 'ChangeCipherSpec' is mentioned on line 1456, > but not > defined > '[ChangeCipherSpec]...' > > == Unused Reference: 'RFC2132' is defined on line 6048, but no > explicit > reference was found in the text > '[RFC2132] Alexander, S. and R. Droms, "DHCP Options and BOOTP > Vendo...' > > ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 3280 (Obsoleted by RFC 5280) > > ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 2434 (Obsoleted by RFC 5226) > > ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 1883 (Obsoleted by RFC 2460) > > -- Unexpected draft version: The latest known version of > draft-calhoun-dhc-capwap-ac-option is -00, but you're referring > to -02. > > -- Possible downref: Normative reference to a draft: ref. > 'I-D.calhoun-dhc-capwap-ac-option' (No intended status found in > state > file of draft-calhoun-dhc-capwap-ac-option) > > == Outdated reference: draft-housley-aaa-key-mgmt has been published > as RFC > 4962 > ---------------------------- > > I have made the necessary changes to address all of the issues. > > PatC > _________________________________________________________________ > To unsubscribe or modify your subscription options, please visit: > http://lists.frascone.com/mailman/listinfo/capwap > > Archives: http://lists.frascone.com/pipermail/capwap > _________________________________________________________________ To unsubscribe or modify your subscription options, please visit: http://lists.frascone.com/mailman/listinfo/capwap Archives: http://lists.frascone.com/pipermail/capwap
- [Capwap] CAPWAP IESG Review Comment E2 Pat Calhoun (pacalhou)
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